Well written! But I read the chapters too fast; then they are gone?I like the direction the story is going in and so far have enjoyed it! :)
Writing Quality: Good and readableUpdating Stability: Superb and always updated!Story Development: Nice pacingCharacter Design: It's nice and cleanWorld Background: Had enough to engage more readers.
Ill give 5/5 since its a kingdom builder. Now for the actual review ....First off even though ima complain mostly its because its good enough to complain about and I like the story. Anyways my biggest issue with the story is the pacing and YES I know the first 200 or so chapters is set-up so I wont mention them. But after Volume 1 its supposed to pick up, and maybe it does a little bit but the writing style makes it seem like it doesn't. ---Basically as a reader who is caught up, I have to wait 1 day for 1 chapter, and that isn't bad as that release rate is quite good. But the content in those chapters are not worth the day wait, so instead you feel disappointed when you look and buy a chapter that is about cutting hair ... thats it that was the ENTIRE chapter! In a kingdom builder that can easily span 1000s of chapters these small things like getting a haircut or finding bones of a dino should be small parts of the overall chapter. ----- What I'm saying is if I stopped reading for a year and came back I wouldn't have a problem because I could skip those chapters or read them and not feel scammed by it because there are hundreds of chapters to binge read. But that isn't the case, Instead I look forward to a chapter to release and it turns out to be a character who doesn't matter getting their haircut and their feelings about it.----- Anyways your book do what you want ill probably still read it even if I feel disappointed because kingdom builders that are readable are RARE.
this book is good is worth to try, just too bad the mc can't play low key haha.this book is good is worth to try, just too bad the mc can't play low key haha.
Book appears to be on hold or dropped by author as there are no updates in quite some time. It does not appear currently on the Authors "Original works" listing as well. Great story development, good character design and such. Start at your own risk as this story may not see a conclusion written/translation.
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Aside from this, the story is just trash. It's terrible. The pacing is slow and the plot is boring. There is nothing imaginative about the story at all, the MC is exactly what you might expect as a system-turned noveau riche. All the side characters are defined by their job with personalities so shallow its borderline unbelievable. The rich guy is a rich guy, the reporter is a reporter, the talk show host is a talk show host, the coworker is a coworker. They have literally no personality or character development and it appears the author doesn't intend on changing that.
TL;DR
Wish fulfillment story, except the characters are shells and the translators westernized all the names.
why is webnovel just pummping out this trash I am a big fan of hidden dragon novels but this is just stupid 1 star ______________________________________
Typical chines novel.. Honestly its too boring now... Faceslap, everybody shcocked, faceslap, everybody shocked for over thousands of chapter.............................
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I found myself really enjoying this. The translation is solid and the survival environment is rather interesting. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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