Choatic natural protagonist
Love this novel
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140 characters eh?
These are from a book called Disorder in the Courts and are things people actually said in court, word for word,
ATTORNEY: What was the first thing your husband said to you that morning?
WITNESS: He said, 'Where am I, Cathy?'
ATTORNEY: And why did that upset you?
WITNESS: My name is Susan!
TTORNEY: She had three children, right?
WITNESS: Yes.
ATTORNEY: How many were boys?
WITNESS: None.
ATTORNEY: Were there any girls?
WITNESS: Your Honor, I think I need a different attorney. Can I get a new attorney?
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ATTORNEY: How was your first marriage terminated?
WITNESS: By death.
ATTORNEY: And by whose death was it terminated?
WITNESS: Take a guess.
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ATTORNEY: Can you describe the individual?
WITNESS: He was about medium height and had a beard
ATTORNEY: Was this a male or a female?
WITNESS: Unless the Circus was in town I'm going with male.
I'm actually enjoying this very much. For this type of novel, its done well enough. And I recommend people to read it!
Positives:
This novel takes care of its numbers well such as troops, resources, system stats. Its a kingdom building story with a game like system. Although its a game type system, its actually real life. The power ups and gradual improvements aren't bad. The game like events for the billions of players are pretty entertaining. MC's cheat is not that strong, in fact his strong point is the location of his territory which synergies's with his talent alone! There are no harems so far (Ch 329), in fact no relationships of any kind at all so far. But this is good since its just been 3 months in the world so he still needs to keep building instead of being distracted by unhelpful love drama lol. His character is to be reasonable, rational in risks vs rewards, attempts to be self sufficient in the desert, kind and fair to his people as normal earthling, not a perfect human since he forgets some things sometimes or needs other citizens to fulfill tasks he can't.
Negatives:
The mentality of players is weird, since they don't treat natives like living beings or even care properly about their lives. Almost crazy tbh.
For MC's progress there are some well reasoned situations, however there are also a bit of blatant plot device based situations which might irk some people lol. Too much luck of course makes it unbelievable and can turn people off, but its an okay amount and not too intense imo.
Another thing is that there are too much high level maps/dungeons around his territory that he can't touch yet, essentially made as a set up for the future. But this seems to be constantly happening.
In recent (300th ish chapters) MC's growth has been slowed down, no idea why author still kept him at his level. He still hasn't found a reliable way to keep his agricultural area safe, not idea why author doesn't just build a wall and arrow/watch towers?
There are of course times like that when common sense is missing or over used words like 'supremely' lol.
All in all its defo worth reading. The small nit picks are easily ignorable when you look at the whole picture. You will enjoy the other aspects pretty well. Currently i've read till latest 329 ch and its great. Its not perfect if thats what you think, but better than most when it comes to kingdom building game like novels. I would rate it 4.4/5.
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First of all, the character development is quite lacking. the author didn't explain why MC got this game like system in his mind. what kind of good deeds he had done before which granted him such cheat.
Second, the way he stitches wound on Mr. Yang is too exaggerating. the wound is quite deep which affect the blood vessel. it should be stitched with different surgery thread for each type of wound. for the blood vessel, for the tendon and last for the skins. it becomes hilarious when MC did it only in one go of stitches.
Third, the way he gets his first fans girl also ridiculous. Just by making stitches on the girl's brother tattoo she gives MC quite a favor. it's not even a wound that life-threatening, you know!
Auto nope because the ml puts 0 thought into who to protect he clearly isnt much of a soldier if he cant even plan and do backround checks on who he plans to protect then pick someone who deserves it
The title sound badass but the novel a let down the MC is stupid always do stuff that put his family in dangerous and don't take advantage of the girl with the holy body or whatever to increase his strength.
When I read the synopsis of this novel, I thought it was similar to an anime I have watched in the past. Once I gave it a read (Currently at Chapter 91), I am honestly blown away. The plot and setting is "Pseudo cliché" meaning that it theme is what people wanna read, but with its own uniqueness. Uses earth as a template for world building so readers are able to have a better visual in imagination. But where this story shines is the characters. Many time', I have read novel, and the MC or complimentary cast don't have many bad traits, but have I weird way a talking, but I honestly believe that the Author has delivered so quality here. On top of that, how they converse is like how I would with my friends. Well done, Author, keep it up.
First time seeing this novel, I think "Oh.. another garbage novel"
But after reading till chapter 31, I know that I was wrong, gravely wrong..
Thinking this now, I even feel regret for not read this novel from the first time it appeared. Sigh..
Moreeeee... moreee.. I need more, please...
baiko wonders where is the legion honestly idk i thought the book would blow up by now but ill add my "review" here to boost stats. so far the story has been great and consistent the world building in interesting and there aren't many grammatical errors if you read rise of the undead legion your gonna enjoy thus one
1star cause its harem. only ugly men whos a virgin will like this. their life is so pitiful that seek harem novel to imagine theirselves as the protagonist.