Well, the story so far have been interesting and engaging. I recommend this story to all who love teen novels especially those who likes high School drama. Although, there are some grammatical error and punctuation error which can easily be corrected by editing it. Anyways it's been quite an interesting read and I can't wait for more chapters, kudos author.
Writing- It is very good, cause the way you expressed it in a documentary style.
as for the updates pls Im begging nex chapter pls... nah its good just keep your own pace pls make a discord. story is somewhat good. though you already used history and add something here and there, atleast you should put a bit of of diversity from our own timeline like the part where atleast bonifacio is not dead but atleast imprisoned, or the japanese or germans aiding us discreetly because they are business rivals with the americans
Low key but op mc........... Can't say Great novel but it's still good. More than 400 chapters in MTL ver..................................................................................
Really fascinating.!my understanding for the characters are this way...they all have a past that links them to their future... that how I wanna put it. it's really intriguing because despite being in separate places...and not knowing what to expect. it puts me on edge cause I think they might lose their lives.
the story is mostly fine. There's just one thing that I hate about the MC, He says chickie buggies a lot... I hate it. I feel like I'm losing my brain cells just by hovering my eyes over it. Although the story explains the reason behind this, I don't like it one bit
a bit interesting hmm.....................................................................................................................................
The MC is crazy stupid. the book talks about revival chances and How supposedly he would never respawn after he ran out. Then he talks about how the price to buy one is high and then he runs out and uses all his money to buy powerups. Theres Lso a time where he gets ambushed by a gang and after he goes to hire a house maid and after is told the the maid he hired is a cyborg and after confronting the person deciedes to let her stay despite the fact the she could and is someone who is out to get him.
lol now this is a novel worth reading..please pick this novel..everything about it is just amazing..an MC with an OP system that doesn't over turn the world system and has a normal vibe to it..the martial arts are just too funny??
This is one of the awesome novel that I have came across to read. I sincerely request the read this novel at least once. I also sincerely request the translator to translate it's all chapters immediately. I'm a very big fan of this novel. In the beginning of first 40 chapters, the speed of story progressing is slow and may get you bored, but later you will appreciate this novel very much. If you are fed up with the novels on the topic such as rebirth,reincarnation, system, heaven defying cultivation technique, as if the main character has whole universe supporting him, then this is one of the best novel to read amongst other novels.
Great so far, I'll wait until the next update to change the stability of updates. Looking forward to the romance, and the power couple. Hope the next update is soon. Been about a month since author went on hiatus.
Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
OOOO, Bebe you got this!She's charming and proud! I love the MC. I mean, I--ok lemme admit it, I'm so envious to the FL >