So another disgusting chinese novel...literal definition of disgusting MC...so if you don't need brain cells then go read it...and the plot is so much trash that you can smell it...well for your good Don't read it if you want an intact brain...
this novel is absolutely amazing ... it is quite different than other sports novel, shows a lot of interactions... the character development could have been a bit better (like giving an idea about his past... there is just small hints about his background which could have been developed more) ... it is quite different to read but also quite captivating ... i really hope it is further continued.
Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters.Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km)After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change.Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met.Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know.Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read)SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!)Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way)Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities)World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained)P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify.It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants.Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do?It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions.Have a nice day everyone!
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So far amazing im just loving it just got to chapter 50 so i thought review time lol only problem i have is nothing lol as he goes through and fixed mist of the grammar mistakes so no complaints from me keep up the good work???
I love me some grrr..?. Lovely build, amazing book, amazing ideas, very entertaining and great communication. Am still going and it gets interesting even more, no slacks.
I'll start this review with a compliment, very good! What's good you ask? The story is another transmigrator that gets a system. It's an academy system but so far in the story, he's mainly used it to increase his strength. I love teaching stories and the path of development I see in this novel suits my tastes a lot. 4 stars for character design and world background but I've only given 5 stars for those for WMW and RI. Another thing I'd like to add is that the protagonist is so-so. He's more of a good person but isn't stupid so he won't involve himself in unnecessary conflicts but he's more of a kind protagonist. I favor evil and selfish protagonists but everybody has their own preference. Finally, I'd like to say that this is the best story of the current trial reads so please support it.