The Sickly Transmigrator Hides the Fact that He Became a Puppy

Your writing quality seems really good and the story development is interesting. Your stability of story is also a plus point of ur novel. keep writing! one good story

I have read the current available chapters (20) and so far I am enjoying the read. It’s the standard weak to strong trope with a system to aid his development. The system is actually sentient and sounds rather interesting. So far he has a goal, the usual one to be better than everyone else and be recognised, no apparent love interest, though the girl he saved may become one but that is purely speculation at this stage. The idea of the house being his avenue to success is something I haven’t read before but it does appeal, especially when he mentions there is over 40 rooms inside so there is a lot of room to grow in this story.Anyways, it is early days and I would recommend this to readers to support and follow.

I know this story will go downhill but still is readable. Too ostentatious. read it only if you have nothing else to read. old-timers who can not find anything good to read can definitely read it once at super speed as it does not have much fanfare. Only 25 chapters in, this is just at the boundary of being trashed.

Low key but op mc........... Can't say Great novel but it's still good. More than 400 chapters in MTL ver..................................................................................

Honestly I REALLY like this book. it has a fun concept that is nice to read while also incorporating game elements into it. The only problem I have with it is the spelling mistakes but that’s only a minor problem.

Although the story starts on a tragic and hard to digest note, the true story starts on a very good note. MC is surrounded by a loving mother and sister, in a mansion full of beautiful women just ripe for the taking. The pace of the story is good, not too slow and not too rushed, new characters are constantly introduced, with new developments occurring every few chapters.The story is in the buildup stage, and it takes time for it to build, but it's worth the patience. Although there are points of improvement since it's the first work, it's a pleasant journey of healing surrounded by loving family and wives.