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An undertale novel that hasn't been dropped on it's head, that's the basic summary of this novel. I hate the word count so much, like, bro, this is a genuine death grudge against a web novel feature. My use of commas are beyond your understanding.
Good book but the childish comedy ruined it for me couldt make it pass 20 chaps jokes were cringe af and not funny.....................
This book may be better than others in this batch but the original was dropped by the author halfway through. The same thing happened to the other book written by the author
I checked out the Raws and a little too much nationalism for my liking. A few sprinkles here and there I don’t mind but when it’s a supposed fantasy world but throw in real life countries and then basically glorify your country every second sentence ruins the novel. Basically only limited interesting stuff to read when he was using the gaming clone smhThat’s my 2 cents on the novel
To be honest I'm almost to chapter 200 and it's become dull. There's no storyline development, so far the whole thing reads like a combat log with some occasional talking. The MC only develops as a fighter and not a person, and I understand this is a combat story but why introduce other characters and have them travel and fight together if he was just gonna be alone. I've grown so tired of the fights that I just skip them.
Hi guys it's your author here. This is my first WSA entry and I hope you guys can support it. I guarantee writing quality, regular updates, no cliches or repetitive content and immersive plot.
Author's Review :Hello readers, This is my first book with a Apocalyptic world, I can assure you that you won't be disappointed with this plot.Honest reviews will be appreciated! Regards,Maya
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I think i could absolutely enjoy your story but the grammar is really bad. I am sorry that i am saying it this direct, but maybe you have a friend or someone you know who can help. Otherwise try to find someone online who would help you and continue writing!
The story has great characters not to mention good story telling.The main character has a personality that matches the background he's given as well as other characters who aren't dull. Overall I can't wait for the next chapter to be released and can't wait to see where the author takes this story.
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