Nice story l must say.....I also liked the author's writting skill more....Its an interesting one and also a very good plot....Keep going author...l am seeing a great future ahead of urs....
The MC is very stupid, being the Heir to the God of death but doesn't train in any of Death's ability even though Death gave him advice on how to become stronger. He then goes and waste time raising a baby instead of training. So he wasn't able to save his hometown from getting destroyed and ends up dead and turned into stone by the princess. Story would have gone better if he went and trained with the God of Death after he died from the princess curse then return.
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good story with a good world building at least since the start 1nd for those who love harem and with a MC op but not too much here you have a good story for having fun reading it hope you will like i did
Broken translation, messy language, messy character names, not really recommended......................!!!
in two days I read 200 chapters a fantastic story and extremely cruel I do not recommend them to weak minds and hearts very well written and real totalemtne recommended.
one of the good sport fictions for cricket... please don't abandon the story
Inconsistent, the main characrer is outright unintelligent, and the whole story is built up for the convenience of the main character. The first chapters looked really promising with a great foundation but soon it all went downhill. Wouldn’t recommend.
incredible
good pace and good plot so far,
The start-off point is awesome. I'm looking forward to more updates from you ...
The dialogue in these chapters is genuinely hilarious. Let me just quote the best line: 'Daddy, this was self-defense. I don't have to pay for her medical expenses, right?' Said by a five-year-old who just dislocated two people's shoulders. The fact that Little Pi Xiu knows the term 'self-defense' and is actively using it as a bargaining chip is peak comedy. She's read storybooks from all realms and apparently the legal system was among the curriculum. Then there's the reward negotiation: 'Daddy, these are Li Li's rewards. The decision is in Li Li's hands. Even Mommy can't make Li Li give them up.' The shift from 'Mommy' to 'Li Li' here is such a small detail but it tells us everything about how this character codeswitches between her child persona and her ancient self. Liang Junping's voice is also great—'Don't worry, Li Li. Uncle Ping will go back and write up two reports.' He's clearly the softie of the group, and his internal panic when Bai Dingting gives him the death stare ('Oh no, he'd forgotten his captain's nickname') is funny because it's so relatable. You can hear his voice in your head: slightly breathless, eager to please, permanently one step away from getting roasted by his captain. And Yu Yingyi's sly grin—'You should reflect on why your daughter doesn't trust you'—that's the kind of line that makes you smile because it's true and he knows it. The dialogue across all these characters feels distinct. You could tell who's speaking without tags.