Fatal System
Novel Info

Summary

... Read More

After keeping his sanity through 3 years of nonstop torture, a boy finally finds light, as he escapes from the bitch's clutch. The boy then leave the Abyss with a few of the bitch's belongings.

Finding a ring that made reality game-like, the boy trains in order to achieve 2 goals. First is to find his missing sister. Second was to torment the bitch's daughter.

---

Here are the list of things I don't like seeing in novels:

Forced plot.

Unreal suspense.

Way too slow romance.

Irrationally arrogant MCs.

Plot that only revolve around narrow-minded antagonists.

MCs that sexually harras or rape women for apparently no good reason.

Women that are baggage.

---

So you can expect to not see any of those above written things in this novel.

things you can expect to see:

MC is quite moral and understanding. He is quiet and composed.

Some level of mild cancer and nonsenical autism (nonsenical? You see what i mean). I started the novel on a whim, so what can i do. My english isn't proud-worthy, FYI.

---

Whoever owns the cover art, lemme know if u want it off.

Community Reviews

Rating(3.1 / 5.0, 15votes)
5 stars
3(20%)
4 stars
2(13%)
3 stars
4(27%)
2 stars
6(40%)
1 stars
0(0%)

Popular reviews

... Read More
good pace and good plot so far,
... Read More
Great story, but author need to edit/make grammar edits as needed.
... Read More
Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love Love love love
... Read More
To be honest I'm almost to chapter 200 and it's become dull. There's no storyline development, so far the whole thing reads like a combat log with some occasional talking. The MC only develops as a fighter and not a person, and I understand this is a combat story but why introduce other characters and have them travel and fight together if he was just gonna be alone. I've grown so tired of the fights that I just skip them.
... Read More
Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice
... Read More
Everything you ever wanted to read is here: Evil Demon Lord Main Character that is controlling everything behind the scenes...What more could you ask for if you’re into that kind of stuff?
See all reviews

Custom lists

Oops…There is nothing here.