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everything checks out, this is a great vampire novel. It's too soon for a full review but it's a good read, especially with some of the twist I did not expect so soon into it. I won't spoil anything though, find for yourself what you like most about it
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Starting Off the grammar Is quite poor with random missing words and sentences that make zero sense to native English speakers. The world background is quite poor with the MC essentially having been attempted murdered but seems nothing happened to that person And MC doesn’t sue or anything. There is no real reason given in the game why the AI decided to skip steps beyond O well. Then when set in the fighting zone MC goes from running and struggling with a single mob to somehow being able to nuke 13 after a single level gain with the fight magically just being complete. The plot armor here would make a nuclear superpower scared to attack. It makes no sense and this ruins the story.
Shameless review and 5 stars, I have been pregnant with this story for some time now, and for that I know it will be amazing and unique read for any one that was lucky to stumbled upon it.The Novel tell the story of Seth Enoch, a boy with below average Constitution, and due to that abnormal body of his, in slight fatigue he will lose consciousness or even went to coma.What else will that poor guy do with his life apart of Gaming Vr Games that don't require his physical cooperation. And he became good at it, until an accident happened which his mother banned him from playing.Years later another game was introduced but special and have no apparent imperfection. Seth dived again.Seth confirmed the game unusual and mysterious feel and for many reason he believed that they were not diving in game but rather their mind was being transported to another world and for that he assumed that he can copy their technology to his World or even used something to invoke beyond natural phenomena. He went on a Quest of his own to prove or disprove his assumption while also trying to brought their technology to his World._____The MC is smart, genius even. But it was not all about winning, he fail to win better prizes and his handicap will hindered him a lot in game and real life but he will use his head to find solutions.*****Regarding whether the game is another world or not, read the novel and found out. You will not be disappointed!
An action packed story about a more disturbed version of batman without the gadgets, so far, but willing to kill like an ice cold assasin. No hessitation to kill, must of been a lovely guy in his past life or already beleived he was his character like a real keyboard warrior, wasnt explained how old he was in past life but i guess either 8 years old living in mental hospital or a 45 year old mafia hitman
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Hi there author! After been reading a few chapters, I only can say that this is an amazing and well-written story, with a lot of effort and passion.With this kind of books it's a pleasure to read! Keep it up! Your story it's incredible!!!
An interesting idea, but the actual story sucks. There is no conflict and everything goes right for the mc, The people who make deals aren't suspicious of him at all either. I wish it was written better. Read this if you want a power fantasy with no plot.
Lord Er Gen!! The grand daddy creator of the F5 Sect! Can't wait to reading this one!Er Gen writes his books and characters with unique sentiments or traits. Like Meng Hao from ISSTH or A will eternal!Wish you the best of fortunes translators and team!
Awesome premise and conceptg but stupid MC, very very slow story,, useless filler dialogues, and to top it all a system which forces tasks on user, and in general tries to guide MC forcefully
HONEST REVIEW! Chapter 344The story is good this is a V-Tuber fic with characters taking on similar persona’s as the v-tubers we have now while staying original themselves.PLEASE NOTE: this story does not use IRL v-tubers but making OC’S using them as a reference.The author does really well with flushing out the character’s background and with explaining there reasons for there actions. The mc John is likeable and smart but at the same time shows that he has the qualities of a returnee that being culture shock, that and him wanting to reconnect with his family gives good character development overall.Now the cons of the book. While John is likeable in his attempt to take the normal route instead of using his overpowering abilities he tends to make light of a situation and in turn it comes back to bite him in the a**. The other characters tend to blame a lot if not everything on John to the point where you are not sure if it’s a joke or not anymore.Personally I feel john let’s people off with a smack on the wrist too much making some of the choices he makes annoying. Overall I loved the story even if something’s annoy me I can deal with it. -thank you author