Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Writing skill is good to the point I'm envious of it.Update stability?? who knows!~Story development?? because I'm reader who always imagine myself as protagonist so I'm a bit biased!! so my opinion its trash because my brain pressured non-stop since I'm binge reading this novel 2-3 day!~Character design?? no matter how good it is, its useless since the author will screw him over and over to the point I'm tired of it!~World background?? its quite good?? meh its still ruined by non-stop torture of fate!~my previous review is too much when I see your efforts writing this so I'm increasing it but after hard time to think, this is all I can give you!!~at least your skill in writing is good, so be proud of that!!~though that non-stop screwing your own MC seem too much for me but maybe its your fetish?? meh whatever!!~
This story was great the plot and it's characters. And for me, I really like it so I recommend it to others to read. I'm not being bias, it just get to my heart. I wish you will give us some wonderful work. Thank you!!! I love it. Fantastic and magnificent, your story is the best. Even though that I like more on action story with the touch of fantasy, I really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable also I really like it thank so much.
It was good at first and promised a lot like other kingdom building novels but the main character failed to reach that objective a vast majority of them.
Have A Question? Ask in the comments. As for Harem/Non-harem - it's not been confirmed yet. I will decide as the story develops and how things turn out.Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.
Who says dual cultivation is bad? Other novels made it look like a terrible cultivation technique but they were wrong. Fellow daoists, join 'MYLITTLEBROTHER's' sect and experience the wonderful world of plucking yin while sharing yang.
Can you please go back and edit the level of the Mc as it’s random level drops and increases with no stability
it's a good ending ............ after so many hardship Darryl Darby have been through in the end he live happily with the girls that his given and almost lost his life to protect and to secure his two brothers lives in peace it's takes me almost a year to finish read this book. and it's cost me alot too
Not telling ppl not to read or buy this, but if you don't like it or found you wasted your time then you weren't alone.
It was good until she had to save that idiot.
very good book love the story.
Love this book!!!