I really like the novels who are fantasy type and male leading because these two things are some hidden gem. I also like the fact that the MC is a parent because most MC nowadays in novels are just some edgy or dense teenagers. Carry on dude! And do not force yourself in the writing!
CAR GUY HERE! GREAT START KEEP IT ROLLING ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Amazing work or art. This story is one that extend a hand of love to the children of the world, it teaches them how to be strong.. Its thematic focus is one the word needs. I hope this story gets celebrated by the world.. Keep it up dear writer
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I must say that I love his story and writing style, the big problem with the story is that he never updates, I keep telling him to write more, but none so far.
When is this novel coming back or is it finished ?
The first chapter was a load of info! Haha, ? I like the story and the premise of the novel. I can only suggest chopping the Infos maybe in between the story. I don't know how but maybe it was okay. To just slowly inject the info into the story and not making it an info dump. Maybe another suggestion was to chop the paragraphs into sentences with enter ↩️ in-between. To make it more easier to read. But still five stars in the quality of writing and story of course. Engaging plot and lovable characters. Kudos and good luck in the future! Peace ✌️
Muito bom! continue assim, autor-san! melhor livro! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa muito bom!
ohhh god here we go again another i see hint theme novel pls stop, if 1 new novel theme got chosen it immediately copy itself become more it's going to get boring, just like pet novel
Read it until around chapter 100 in the raws.Slow story. This is certainly not a xianxia power rush. As another commenter as said, this is more like a slice of life novel. Some things to note: Just the fact that the MC's first major cultivation level has needed dozens of chapters to breakthrough should give the reader the right expectancy.The plot is the usual for this type of novel so don't expect great originality.The writing cannot be considered very good, but it is way above what we poor mortals are usually been fed in this site.The author seem to have done some little research about what he is talking about and not just spiting completely random BS just because it looks cool.Some characters are not just zero dimensional and could actually menace to reach 1 dim. In particular the MC. The author has managed to use all the tired and overtried chinese webnovel MC pseudo characteristics but managed to make them blend into something of a silhouette of a human being. That is a real achievement.This also means that our MC is not a copy of schwarzenegger's terminator.Unfortunately this also means that there are irritating situations and characters that hinder our easy reading flow. Some because of the way this caricature of a world influence its beings, and some just because the author is not that good at humor as needed in those cases. Note that this not mean that this story doesn't have humor. On the contrary. There is plenty of soft and even subtle humor, which is appropriate for a slice of life type of story....This author gives the feel of someone who is on its way to be a very capable professional writer, but only the future can tell.All in all this novel is readable and, given our drought of good books to read, might even deserve a 4 stars rating from me.
It's interesting. Zombie did not turn out to mean quite what I thought it meant. It checks boxes on many genres, including apocalyptic, reincarnation, and cultivation.Apart from the occasional small grammatical error, the writing is easy to follow, although the style is a bit narrative for me. The writer is very consistent so far!