mate everything was fine and dandy. the story was good the character was good the background is kinda mysterious. the update stability so far is nice but there are some problems that author really needs to think about. first of all what is this book about. it's game so you need to make it clear the data about the enemyy when they fight the reward that he gets,the quest that he takes, etc but instead this novel is like an urban slice of life romance type paced story or even an Japanese high school type story which is inconsistent from my point which makes it barely readable like a game novel should be and another point is the exaggeration of expression. for eg. if I say he smiled,".........." which makes sense but when you put he widely smiled,".........." then that makes it extremely exaggerated for me. if it's once or twice it's fine but if it's after every single time that he smiles you put widely after it then it makes it unpalatable for me. overall everything is extremely good but author should definitely focus on what he is writing about if he wants to make the novel a top class which the reader want to read again and again. thank youyour sincere reader
This has got to be one of the most annoying novels I've ever had the misfortune to add to my library.The development is too slow. There are way too many unnecessary bits of info that do nothing for the actual plot. The main character is supposed to be a genius but is portrayed as the dumbest moron you'll ever read about.I wish I could read more but 15 chapters is more than enough for me.Deeply disappointed.
Hello, Author again, it is officially chapter 100, my first milestone! at first, I doubted my novel because I'm new and didn't know much about writing properly so, now! (Though still improving) I'll definitely recommend you read the novel, I don't know how my novel is because my head is filled with spoilers so, if you could tell how it is it'll help me a lot so, Thank you! ✌️
This story is not only really well written but also contains a great storyline that hold many twists and turns. It is definitely worth a read.
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This is a true realistic story. I see potential in this story. Keep up the good work there author! I'm loving the different POV of every characters, it feels like i'm reading a comic.
Woah! That's a lot of chapters! What's your ave word count? I'm giving this a little boost because among the books that I've reviewed today, this one's really easy to the eyes, if you know what i mean?The story's really interesting though. And like i said earlier, the cover's cool!Can't believe i actually went over 140!!!yey!!!
All you have to do to understand the utter uselessness and stupidity of this story is to read the Glossary chapter (right after the Prologue), especially the 2nd part to the end. What a waste of braincells.
I have been bamboozled! This is a harem but without a harem tag! Be warned my fellow daoist who are not controlled by their big brother, this is a sham! P.S Grammar is sickening and plot is eh
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This gets five stars from me for a number of simple reasons:- The writing is on point here. Transitions are smooth and nothing is rushed- Doesn't rush too much despite being a short story. The writing allows the build up as to what would happen next- Got some good showing and imagery going on. - This is a finished and completed work.