BettyDinata
My very first novel and the best that made brought me to love novels similar. Although i absolutely love this novel I am seething with about about the fact that it was moved from Wuxiaworld and brought to QI.
After an...unintentionally long hiatus from wn, I decided to come back to some nice PancakesWitch novels. I was sad to see that some were already completed, but then I saw that there were new stories and I was overjoyed.I started reading this one and I immediately knew that it would be my kind of story. I can't wait to see what's in store! Keep up the great work!
The stability of the update is good.The storyline is unique and the mc is well slightly........overpowered!Character development is all good.In the very first three chapter, we understand what kind of a person is mc!
amazing character development love the new abilities and the chance that more will come into the future. this novel has so much potential, love it!
This is one of the most well written books on the site, at least as far as the first 60 chapters go. I would say the quality of writing and translation are comparable to Lord of the Mysteries.The world, characters, magic, and development are truly excellent. I really hope this book gets picked up. I strongly recommend this one to folks, and dou lynch so if one has interest in ancient Greece or philosophy.
Am I the only one who has never seen the MC avoid spells and only counter them? And causing him to be hit back by the difference in cultivation? She should be fast as her element is wind but she was just throwing energy here and there.Will he learn to fight then? Please answer because I will continue or not depending on the author's answer.What I mean above is about volumes 1 and 2. If I'm wrong then please show me. Because I'm reading this in a bad mood.
I like this.....................................................................................I'm obviously not good at writing reviews.
This is Garfield. I just made this story cause I was bored. Really, Really Bored. I used the story to get my own Writer to gold.Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
Just fantastic this is the story I've been looking for an mc who stays true to himself i cannot wait till the next chapter comes out and i appreciate the first two volumes being free because i am reading too many stories that went full on premium real quick so just saying keep up the great work ?
A new novel - Eastern fantasy. There are pluses, there are minuses. This is an honest review.The quality of the text block, you can give 5 stars, is easy to read, almost everything is clear. Interestingly written, even fascinating.Updates are ongoing, 2-3 chapters sometimes. If the author manages to maintain this pace for 2-3 months, then he deserves praise. While he succeeds. Bravo! 5 stars.The development of history - is dynamic, but sometimes there are jumps from one topic to another IMHO of course, 5 starsBut the character’s character is not clearly spelled out, it is not clear what his character traits, what emotions, who he is at all, what kind of person he is, what he lives with? 4 stars.The world - it is not described in detail, at first you can’t understand where the actions take place, in what time, era, how this world looks like? What is special about it? But, somewhere in the middle of the 15-20th chapter, the world is partially clarified, simply by pointing to oriental fiction. Such worlds have already been described in a dozen novels of a similar genre. Therefore, also 3 stars.Plus the novel, reading it is fascinating, sometimes intriguing, although sometimes reading the beginning, the end can be predicted.The quality of writing is good. There are some original points, finds.Cons - The novel is replete with cliches inherent in the stories of this genre. Originality, thoughts are not always shown, there are compilation of plots.In general, I liked the novel, I read it regularly, included it in my library. If you have nothing to read, and you like the genre of oriental fiction, not too fans, then a very good novel to read.Thanks to the author for his work! Much has been written, and with a good text block, updates are regular without interruptions, it costs a lot. Really cool!respectfully
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This is interesting. The writing style is unique and the story flows smoothly. The author describes everything nicely.The story has a lot of potentials. This is a good read.
