the story is very nice with an innovative and interesting idea, I really like that there is finally a story where there are other races, the only thing is that everyone has a system, mc has a good and coherent character, the dialogues they are good, this is more of a soft read there is not a lot of action
The main character talks to the author what's so funny?It's sad and impossible to read.Causes disgust from the very beginning and does not allow reading further.Here's an estimate for your diligence 0/110
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I don't think my review has any real meaning coming from an inexperienced writer suchas me, but I'll give my views on the story anyways.So from the first few chapters, there were many, many descriptions. Much so that it cut some fights and actions halfway, leaving me in awkward reads once in a while (though that's what I just observed).There was also shifts in narration perspective, leaving me confused from time to time on whether the narrative of thestory is infirst-person or in third-person omniscient (I just figured out that every chapter that starts with "memories of..." is in first-person perspective, so yeah).I also wasn't too invested between the characters, you know, having too many introduced in the first few chapters. It left me feeling like "I don't really care if Velsado dies or whatevs..." and more of like "When are the powers and magic stuff gonna come again?" Yes, I think I'm back to being a nine year old.Although many things broke my immersion with the story, I really found the richness of the worldbuilding complete. The concepts of the story is unique, and I honestly don't know where the story will go (Although being predictable once in a while is a good thing). The many characters interacting with the world events, it really felt like a very much solid story where I don't think plotholes will arise (unlike in mine where I'm still fidgeting to fix loose ends).If you reached this part of my review, then thank you for reading. Hope you'll kinda get something out of my review although I'm still new to writing myself. I just limited my review to the writing quality, story progression, characters, and worldbuilding if that's okay.Cheers!
very good novel.will recommend if you want a evil MC.
I don't read it yet but I really like the concept, one of the most valiable thing that a modern person could bring for an fantasy world was the cientific thinking. I just don't understand why in so many transmigrator novel the only reference to our world are bad jokes.
There’s a similar “sign-in” type novel called “sign-in buddha’s palm” where the protagonist is also very OP and it’s just him cruising through situations and I find, and this my personal opinion, that while this type of novel is one of the few that is, while not that interesting when read in succession, it’s pretty good read when it’s just a chapter or two a day because it’s just interesting enough to entertain you for a bit but just not enough to leave you sour with a cliffhanger and while this might be construed as an insult, I personally meant it as a compliment.
Author tends to forget what they write and goes back on what they say but other than that its a decent read. MC is surrounded by beauties but only lets them give him a massage while in the tub. Only complaint is the women no matter who they are become brainless fans the moment they meet the MC which is dumb but maybe its to hype up the woman he will end up w and hopefully she can actually match our boy and wont just be a simp
Another Translation group already Translated this Novel.you guys can go and read that for free.webnovel just copypaste that translation group hard work.this Novel will ruined by webnovel.
There were no men in this world.Imagine if it's the other way around...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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