Maid for you

Wait when did this exist ARE YOU CHEATING ON ME TANAKA AGAIN DIDNT I TELL YOU TO STOP AT LIKE THE 66th TIME UGH FINE LETS BREAK UP (Could you try a sword art online fanfic)

Starting the story has cost me but in the end I like it. The character development is very well done, none is wasted and forgotten, everyone contributes and is known about them. I like the story, especially the clues about the system, I have never seen the system come out in volume 2 XD, in general very happy with this novel.

Yeah this story turned around quickly. It was a cool start, but with in 5 chapters the author made his MC cheat the system. He literally has over a few billion points from killing himself on the FIRST DAY. Even a god can't kill him and now he has a dungeon that instant creates things. What is the point of reading this novel now when the MC is on par with god.... well until the author decides to increase the power levels? Right now he can magically poof things into existence, he has complete control over new york and his sister has a mythical weapon. There is no point of reading this novel now when the t-ension is removed. I wished you didn't do this and had a weak to strong build up.

Grammar is terrible. '...................................................................................................................................

Writing Quality is bad and stupied.Story Development is like children book.Character Design you never make description to a Character  height wieght and looks and backgroud and .....World Background first you need to make a decription in you first chapter about this new world that no one know about.any way great effort.

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