love it...love it...love it soooo muchnot many genre like this one, it is great to follow the upgrading ability that MC has. more please author, thank you so much.
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Super good book 5/10 : D ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ and .
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so far (1-30) this seem to be a unique book, it takes a different approach to the usually system like novels! in my review the book/auther seems to do the opposite of what is expected. for example king yama being female or the system having a personality only when the character dodo something oblivious. there is a little of unorthodox humor in between, which nice for a change. all in all; this book has potential to be great in a unique. if your looking for a run thru consistedly level up and badass main character this book isn't for you but if your looking for comedy/slice of life look no further.
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Aahhh I like the story! Esp. the main character lol He's so cool, and he's my new crush ? I also felt like going into the gaming world! Looking forward to more works of the author! ?
decent story, kinda hard to understand at beginning with all the forshadowing and the monolouge of the main character but when you got far the story clicks and got interesting with or the build up before it
And another potential awesome book from shadow the same, bravo, you have my utmost respect. This book is... is simply something else, I can't explain why your stories are able to drag me into them so easily. Just started and I already love how the potential character set up, the personalities are there well fleshed out, the background of the MC Nero is well done, we see his drive, his purpose, even the system is plain awesome, I love its simplicity yet well thought out route.The thing I like the most is Adult Nero, such a nice twist for reincarnation, rather than having the Old Man Spirit, or just takeover, haha, really unique!
Author got to chapter 36 and decided "yeah, this is where I'll ruin the story."The MC's stupid mother gets herself killed, and then the father, KNOWING HE'LL DIE 100%, goes and does the same thing and dies pointlessly. Then, the MC and his sister also almost die and the LEADER OF THE ENEMY comes and says not to kill them or they won't have a work force. Horrible plot armor, even for a Webnovel. So lame. Would've been great to just have the mother die.Side note, the grammar is bad. There's a few slip-ups every few chapters, messing up entire words or changing pronouns.
Pretty dang good. The RL prologue introducing the character and why he ends up playing the game is brief but believable, its refreshing to see neither the lazy cliche "Everyone has enough disposable income to spend every day playing a game" nor filler chapters dedicated to RL just to make the story "realistic".Character developments good so far too, slow in a good way, where we are told an appropriate amount of information about a character for how long the MC has known them (there's no "you saved my life so here's my entire life history and also my unending loyalty). Not to say the MC doesn't quickly form relationships(in a way that fits his character/personality), but so far everything has been progressing naturally. The only criticisms I have are not knowing much about the MC's history, but I'm only on chp 14 so it could still be coming, or it might be more of a gradual reveal, either way I'd like to know just a bit more early on. Also, the world is large, and location names are kinda hard to keep track of. If anyone is thrown by other reviews complaining about the sex, know it isn't really described explicitly(so far I've only seen 1 short instance describing the sex, 95% of the time its "they kissed and went to the bedroom
The story is interesting and mysterious. It's just that sometimes i don't understand what is happening but it'll explain in the end. Currently reading it so I can't say more. Hope it'll surprise me more. Expecting much from this book . ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️