The first chapters were simply good, the story was great, the balance of power, the hero was ruthless and scheming, but I dropped him in chapter 25, simply a terrible mistake, this king revealed his great secret of being so easily incarnated (I doubt how he managed to survive with such stupidity) And by the legendary coincidence that he is the friend of the dear, sincere hero, whom he knows only from the game, and the hero easily disclosed his secret and all his secrets to this person who only knows him through the game. Is that the main character began to include the indigenous people of this world, to his loyal soldiers of the game, so that the absurd and stupid things will appear a lot because of this merger, especially the actions of the hero so that it becomes like the rest of the trivial Chinese characters,
For those that enjoy novels with system then this novel jumps right into the action. The pacing is good and the world building shows that the writer put a lot of thought and effort into it. The updates are stable and I look forwards to the next chapters to see what else we will discover. Even though some explanations seem a bit sparse for my taste at first. The more you read everything starts to come together as the story progresses, keep on writing and all the best!
I like the way your new work is trying to go in a whole new direction and all, after it is tiring to always read about some unlucky guy trying to get revenge for being rejected by a girl. "Boy! Ain't got no manners..." How many people get rejected daily and it does not be come the highlight of their life. Keep that up, but if the story starts developing such symptoms, I'm bailing
5 stars for the tags ..i just can't resist giving 5 stars after looking those tags.........................................................
i love this story soooooo much! meatbu never disapoints!!!! I alos really iked the translation! it's smooth and really enjoyable plus i always like reading the authors notes at the end of each chapter 10/10!
Shame doesn't feed you, so there's no point in having shame.Try it, you won't regret it.Also, you might want to read this when you're alone...Along with wearing baggy pants...
Sorry for the long review but this my first ever review i have ever written. I don't know about other people but when i read a web novel, i put my self in mc's shoes and think of myself as the protagonist of the story, that's why i mostly read wish fulfillment novels (where the mc gets a harem of virgin girls, dealing with enemies ruthlessly , having iron balls of courage and other general stuff that can never happen in real life).So when i saw the title of this webnovel i immediately refused to read it even when the story description interested me. But my curiosity got the better of me and i read it. And quite frankly it depressed me, i mean who wants to be cucked, humiliated, beaten up and be a wimp. so i wanted to stop reading it .BUTthe plot was very interesting, so i went through the depressing parts just in hope that mc becomes a badass and quiet frankly i was impressed by the character development of the mc.Though he hasn't become a badass, he is on the path of becoming one. i recommend people to read this novel for it's interesting plot and character development.NOTE TO AUTHOR:- i don't care even if joanne was forced or blackmailed into have *** with reid . i just don't want that bitch to become mc's woman , at present mc cut off friendship with her which left me satisfied but if i see any signs of her becoming mc's woman i will immediately drop the novel no Matter how interesting the plot is.
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This is probably the best novel out the current batch. thats all..................................................................................................................................................2021 baby
Will this is a great novel to read, MC is my type that is ruthless and smart, the plot is good and I like itkeep going auteur withe this great work
I think that the story has a god passing, and when they talk about thing like gore it is chill and not over dramatic and I like how they make past event have something to do with future events.
The plot, it's so gooooooood.The situations and approach are so realistic, I'm dying to read chapter 3 now. Btw I loved the way you introduced Xander, Yena and Zico.