I thought his goal was to become a Hunter travel the galaxies and Look for Gen Ya's family so he could return his body
I want some spoiler about how many girls will he end up with in the end.
GREAT is has potential and I like the way the story his developing. 8.7/10
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Classic instance of Webnovel using an actual translator for the first 60 or so chapters and then swapping to an edited MTL afterwards. In other words, regardless of the actual quality of the original work, the translated story becomes hot garbage that they have the gall to try and charge you for.
great story that uses the vr game as a base isnt really a novel of the type it actually reads more as a syatem in a fanatys world novel which is great as it makes it more enjoable in my opinion theres a lot of forshadowing of great things to come as of chapter ~200. Overall a grear read can only recomend
I am blown away by the world-building. I love how you have set the pace and in each chapter we discover new powers and beings. The story development is intriguing enough for me to want to read more. Congratulations Author, Job well done. You have created a masterpiece!!!
I like how he prefers to create new routes, stories and characters, even though the problem is the stability of the updates, neat at least I think this is readable
I love the plot of the story, especially the Mc Tom and his invented AI Noor.Although the pace seems a bit slow, I still love how I get to feel what the MC is feeling as I read.It is a great read ?❤️
? Good book , I have read up to the newest chapter which was chapter 60 at the time of me posting this review . I have been left satisfied by the ending of volume 1 and still eager for volume 2 , It has been a good experience reading this book so that’s about it for my review .
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The plot armor is too thick. Boring. .
Hahaha, I'm liking this already. Nice one author. I just started reading but I can already tell that this story is unique, unlike the cliché ones I've been seeing these days. I'll enjoy this, its a good change of pace for me. Continue, thanks!