I'm the protagonist, yet the girls can hear the villain's inner voice

So far so gud. I've almost caught up with the latest chap uwu really enjoying it. Raiden is quite an interesting character, my personal favorite. The best thing I like about him is that he doesn't flush the toilet :)

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I had read a few chapter, dozens of it... And I had to say, I kind of miss the old style of game world based novel... Now, it just feel complicated and had alot of stuff that should be simple but being describe in confusing manner.. But maybe it just me who can't keep up with this new style..

this is going to be my first review after checking out 3 chapters of the story. so far pretty good we expect the typical vr gaming background if you have read one before. i just dont like the mc character pretty coward . he got this old classmates bullies for some reason he is afraid of them and my imagine is running wild because a normal guy would only be afraid of physical bullying since base on my opinion and info i have read so far, he is someone who does not care about social life. somewhat of a recluse quiet child .If  i were the mc i should at least try to do some self defense he is 5 feet 9! if i am going to bully him as a 5 6 when i was 14 years old back then i will at least think twice regardless of his physical type. the bully trope is getting old now a days since we know that typical quiet child is not afraid to pull a trigger to kill his classmates like in america hahahah. i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizenso far very good introduction. i think i need to read more  chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.