The MC's shamelessness knows no bounds and thanks to his unique character, I am in love with the story. Everything about it so far, screams mystery and I am looking forward to unraveling more. Keep up the good work author.
This is my second review of this novel as I said in the first one that I read novels on LN reader because on webnovel you only find harem-type novels. But this one isn't like that. I only log in to webnovel to read this and the Author of this novel is a fast learner he quickly catches up and improves at lightning speed. He even interacts with readers and asks them to tell him anything they don't like so he can improve that too, Really, what a guy.So give it a try until chap 10 and after that, you will start liking it I guarantee that ?
up till chapter 40. very good pre reincarnation sequence. very uninspired post reincarnation, boring life boring magic boring Interactions. all of it lacks any spark of ingenuity and feels very generic. i know it probably gets better after a while but i just don't feel like suffering through 100 chapters just for a chance especially since nothing so far has shown any promis. the grammar has been very good for what it's worth at least that's a W
this is like the only dom fic thats really gets inro the nitty gritty stuff love it.
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From the beginning of the novel a had a feeling of deja vu like I have already read the scenerios before but the characters didnt add up so I thought, there is a novel I read just recently on this site but similar to this book. Its'Reborn:revenge of the heir'Now I don't know if this is coincidence, similar styles, same author. This novel did hook me more than to other one. But the same underlying core aspects included.Reborn in fetusTwin telepathy Sister getting almost kidnapped and raped in gymThe son taking over a subsidiary of the business and arriving early, the diologue with the receptionist,the ceo thinking hes late,the problem with the secretary, the language 'code red' to describe getting rid of people. It was uncanny how many similarities. So I dont know if this an issue of plagiarism,just know i read this book longer than the other.
to be honest I think this might be something created from the novel astral pet storeI like that novel and since the author is different might as well treat it as a completely different one....we never know maybe this one might become better than astral pet store novel
Its sad that this only went to lizardmen arc, and even not finish it. Also for next arc like momon vs demiurge will not be shown here is it?
The thing I really enjoy is the interactions between the characters, it makes them come to life. The story is also quite exciting and I love your writing.