I love this story, I'm from comics and I can't resist, so here I am.Funny story even if very repetitive, but this is a "flaw" that I hope will remain until the end, I don't want a different development, it's perfect as it is.
Translation is eloquent, BUT the original author seems to be lazy with the story.... As a D&D player in 3.5e and 5e, I sometimes feel oddities within the writing. I became more interested in read the Ch. 60+ mtl versions until the story's end.The story based on WoW instance dungeon style with D&D 3.5e+Pathfinder+ part 5e class Monk growth, but eventually acts like a diary with mismatched temporal flow (saying if its been a month or some random day in Spring, but only a few days passed) and misplaced D&D system rules..... Even the irregularity with D&D rules or lack of explaining the network system by the original author... makes me feel cringed....The original author of this D&D story seems to become lazy and does not add Status display updates or refer to vital items used by the Monk Yi Qiu such as the Hulk pants material (Ch. 65)...The physical descriptions are hazardously placed... (1) bald (2) below average Chinese citizen male physique in Southern China (3) Necessary monk muscles by Ch. 30+.... (4) Arms' appearance/anatomy...(Ch. 64, 120, 298, 363, 808)? SPOILER!: Eventually the original author gives up the player networking post-Ch. 766 [Yi Qiu Monk Lv20] even as early Ch. 407 and sends him on a random episodic exploration collecting storyline [NO MORE INSTANCES-DUNGEONS!! even rewards became food stuff]...Overall, I can see the translation displays the original author's experience in D&D since 3.5e, but the story lacks realism... How is Yi Qiu's status screen per level up?....!!!!! SIGH........!!!
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Esperava outra coisa quando comecei a ler, mesmo assim dei uma chance, contudo não foi do meu agrado, então decidi parar de ler. Pode ser que está fanfic seja do seu gosto.
Ugh it is just like any other typical chinese cliched story with a transmigrator, crippled body, breaking off of engagement and then getting a cheat . Not my cup of tea at all.
The story is fascinating and the fact that it is the author's first system story, the author did a pretty good and I enjoyed reading the book. Will be looking forward to more from you.
It is an entertaining and action-packed story, I really recommend it as a read to relax a bit, it will not disappoint you as it has a good plot that will always keep you waiting for the next episode.
Author I would just like to apologize for not releasing any new chapter due to circumstances and that new chapter will being releasing soon.
I never ever read this type of book in my life, it's fantastic and in ending of every chapter suspense is fabulous i like it ,.........I had the chance to beta read this story, and I see the improvements Tiffanie incorporated. This is a light-hearted urban fantasy without the dark and troubling twists often found in such reading. The story shows what daily life could be like with the supernatural with humor, and keeps you wondering what's going to happen next. I read it with pleasure, and while there weren't any coffee spewing moments, I did snort water a couple of times. If you like "What If", you'll like this; if you like humor, you'll like this
10/10 novel. ? love every bit of it, and idc what anyone rlse says. its very good, the inky thing that can be worked on is updating stability
If there are negative stars I would have gladly given them but it restricted to 1 star.The story was somewhat okay but MC is absolute pathetic.
keep going and don't drop this novel I really like it.........................................................................................