KEEP IT UPNeeds better improvement . It has potential First chapter is great, Aster's struggles are so heart wrenching .I'm fully invested in the story
This could be a good story if the grammar and the pronouns are correct...
great novel as usual by don thistle good
Another brilliant issue, look forward to next week’s instalment. Thank you ☺️ I enjoyed the personal side to it aside from the fighting it’s good to get to know the characters.
novel is pretty good author does a really good job in character design and development
wow I ? really love it is perfection ? I really can't wait to read the new chapter ?
A story with a great potential ruined by the author himself. I feel sad that such a plot idea came into his mind so early of his writing carrier. He did try to improve in his later chapters but still always messes up the story.The mc is just unbearable. He doesn't improve, not commited enough,doesn't properly plan what he wants to achieve. Overall one of the worst mc i've ever seen.The author also messed up with mc's power progression. Everyone just always says that his potential is infinite yet we don't see any progression. I wasted so much time and money just in hope that author will improve and reach the potential this story has.Yet every time i get disappointed. It felt like a clickbait. Gave us hope for something good yet gave us below average story. And the name of the novel is very misleading. There is no villainy thing in it.Just a average joe mc. So if you are here for a villain mc then please don't read it instead read villain retirement. And why am i ranting so much?Because i feel frustrated with the story,and others who said to us that it will improve yet it jever did.Don't read this if you want to read something exceptionally good.
Never! Never! Never! Never! Never!
How could he not be, the student with the most highes card report school value and Exp (Experience), we can see how much Exp someone was, with the magic "ExpScene". In a school there are 2 things that can be obtained, first is Exp second is some random value in your card report school.
"This made you angry and feel rage for your mother`s mistreatment, as if she was just a toy for them." Alex answered for Millicas, who looked up to him with a bit of a shocked expression. "You love your mother more than anything, don`t you, Millicas?"
The cyclops turns back to the container and releases the Fog.
"So you're saying I should spread the power throughout my Sharingan rather than focus it?" Itachi summarises before beginning to try Chopper's idea.