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An absolutely hooking start to the story with a tad bit of humor set's one's frame of mind for the chapter to come ahead.The world building is fully fleshed out like his previous works?.Don't know where this one shall lead us in the end but, hoping to get some mythological seasoning!!!(fingers ??*) #FanNo.283
Sigh look I know I gave it a 3 star review, don't let that number stop you from reading please. This power system I love it too pieces the writing style of the author just needs some polishing on the mechanics. There's not huge grammar issues or anything it's readable just needs work. I'll follow this series closely hopefully one day I can give it the 5 stars I know this story should be able to get.
The more I read, the more I enjoy. I just felt like writing another review to say that!The characters are well thought out and intriguing and I want to find out more.I am certainly enjoying it so far!
Yes! I gave it five stars! If you have read what I read, you would too. The name got me first, then the synopsis then the chapter. Gosh, I was hooked despite it being my first time reading this genre. Warning beforehand, the Santa we see at first is really annoying(I nearly strangled him several times) but it gets better if you just wait for it! I am definitely going to read more of this! Mage, you have impressed me!
please add more chapters It really is a wonderful story
I'm reading this author's second novel, and all I can say is that I'm impressed. The author did a good job with the descriptions and characters, just like in the previous book. I appreciated how the author chose names that are frequently used for online or video game usernames. The grammar was also excellent. Not simply the book but also this author is highly recommended.
Nice book. If you are a sci-fi fan like i am then please read this book. I quite liked the fact that this book has a rich section of vocabulary and I found no grammatical errors. Overall it is amazing.
The story title is great & the Synopsis is well written...The beginning of the chapter intrigued me to read further...the choice of words is excellent & perfectly blended...Great work, Author!
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