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I love a book like this, but you need to tell me more about the background
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This is surprisingly good.Let's talk about the Story, I think the Prologue could be longer, but all in all, it's intriguing to read. The Mystery of the MC is one thing to anticipate, as well.The World Background isn't bad. I like Chaos. I like it better if you could deliver them in which it'll be a hit to our emotions when reading it.Most of the Writing Quality is OK, but you know it, the use of Continuous Dialogue, ("), and the Grammar could be Improved a little by little.Overall? It's an Enjoying Read. I won't remove it from my Library, and I'll wait until it got more Chapters. I wish you the best.
great story, the flow is really nice and I can't wait to continue reading ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yeeeeeeaaaaaaaahhhhhh damn still need to type more
A great novel that is hidden.. found by chance and found a unique cultivation system...good world building and characters....all i have left is to thank the author of this work
great novel over all and a very interesting concept the grammer is not bad only few mistakes are made but the only problem that I face that sometimes I find my self lost a new charchter is introduced and I am supposed to know him ? and the time skips aren't that clear but every thing else is ok
My only problem with that novel is the Writing Quality.... ..... pls hire a proofreader..................................................................................................................................................
enjoy the book as I'm working it's a grand world builder and has a good wolf type
Well I am the author of this and I certainly will not tain on my parade. I believe plenty of people will do it for me. It's my first attempt at writing anything substantial and English is not my primary language so the vocabulary and grammar might be somewhat lacking. Anyway, if you enjoy it great if not not so great. If you can leave feedback of any kind I would be greatful. Regards from a fellow reading fanatic.