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It's a good story but the pace is TOO FAST!?Like, "Wait what? What happened again?" There's no time for readers to digest what's happening and the characters lack reaction (e.g. When the co-worker saw his new car or when the boss got pointed a gun and blackmailed)Also, you have a lot of mistakes with a & an, now & know as well as to & too... It would be great if you could separate the conversation into different paragraphs:I said, "...." My boss, "..." exclaimed. Something like that... I hope this helps your group... -from Originals Author Society
Great story but lacks updates..... The rest after this is gibberish so I can get 140 characters..............ehcisbjdjvsnofyzhhekfhxbdki mhfuzhdnxky s to ugsnvkcgsntjvjgzmficgsh nmsj gejeiftwuqozkmx mjdk,icb as ny c vavqiZlsoqnxhfow????h fr???ehsbjsbae wicjdb
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I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS BOOK. PLEASE FRIENDS, DOES ANYONE KNOW WHERE I CAN READ ANY OF HIS CONCURRENT BOOKS. I JUST LOVE HIS PROFICIENCY IN LITERARY TALENT.
A very good novel 10/10 Would recommend then again its only the beginning still so the author has a lot of chances to screw up. I don't think this story would fit well with a harem as its a modern world so don't do it.
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a great read.even the seemingly 'ordinary' and 'mundane' things are written so well that I just couldn't stop reading until it finished!and it's not even fiction!and the pics are too good, i can imagine how good of a place u visited.it's just great.author-san, i now know that i need a trip to beach and farms to get some relief from this stressful life.
This book is really good so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you very much ??????????
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Like why the change after the dwarf kingdom, it's like the whole backstop doesn't matter anymore.