The Arrow of Destiny Cuts Through the Night

You know I love animes especially action one and this book meets all of my expectation. The way the writer explains the fight scenes is superb and my imaginations is wow when I read through it. I highly recommend this book,keep it up author ???????

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This is surprisingly good.Let's talk about the Story, I think the Prologue could be longer, but all in all, it's intriguing to read. The Mystery of the MC is one thing to anticipate, as well.The World Background isn't bad. I like Chaos. I like it better if you could deliver them in which it'll be a hit to our emotions when reading it.Most of the Writing Quality is OK, but you know it, the use of Continuous Dialogue, ("), and the Grammar could be Improved a little by little.Overall? It's an Enjoying Read. I won't remove it from my Library, and I'll wait until it got more Chapters. I wish you the best.

        "but you're acting like one. Also, i think you're valid to be the father of my kids in later future. You can be a good parent."

One month later.