An excellent continuation of the TAP story with an emphasis on the Exodus platform and the Guns and Gore game tantalizingly mentioned in the original storyline.
The story has a japanese feel to it.Quite heart warming and it has plenty of heart warming moments.Encourage readers to add this story.
A wonderful novel. I hope it gets chosen!!!
This has to be one of the stalest novels I have read. The characters made no sense, story makes no sense, the mc make no sense. It’s like someone decided to put a bunch of genre together, hoping for something great. This sucks
Very good. Keep up the good work. Good Original novels are very rare nowadays, everywhere it's just trash novels with ****ty prose structure which is just a pain to the eyes. Among these your novel truly stands out as a gem. Just don't drop the story. ????????????????????
It was quite good! Some of the scenes are quite realistic and the description is good. The plot in itself was quite interesting!Keep writing and best of luck!
Its some really bad copie from the legendary mechanic.. .. .. ..... .. ... .. .. ...... ... ...... .. ..... .... .. ... .. .. .. .. ... .
Just a fun read nothing too serious just some naughty fun
Surprisingly not premium after the first few chapters. Qidan is notorious for going premium with no reason. Very surprised a new novel on here has 600+chapters. That alone makes me start asoing questions about where they come from. But, i read way the hell too much. Even if its an iffy source, i need the chapters to feed my addiction
I want this to be picked please.I want more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters
Another utterly braindead barely human mongoloid gets an utterly broken system.He should of just stayed dead with this lukewarm IQ.
I have read until charter 40, not feeling like spending fast passes to read more, will read at aggregator site but nvm that the review. The idea is original and that is what enticed me into reading, an omnipotent bank that everyone even gods are indebted too! The idea rocks! But the way the author writes and develops is ... bad. like someone very young writes which his best anime was dragonball. (no offense to those who still like it i did too back in the day but then.. i grow up, unfortunately.. maybe..) Too many words and expressions repeated again and again which make me skim through the paragraphs to only read the dialogues and again only those who are between the mc and anyone else. The story progression is very unrealistic, fast and machine like. for example: Mc: what do i need right now? a i need X. where do i get it? a there! why do i need it? for R... so on and so on. Human beings struggle with decisions they dont have everything planed out especially when they get into something totally new like a new job or a new art or a new anything.Also the background story of the main character is minuscule and doesnt really make you emphasize with him or help into the immersion. Finally the world is a very generic world which i guess you find in other bad quality cultivation novels and the hierarchy is all the time shot down with a new higher level power being revealed pretty often.If you have nothing else to read maybe you can have a bit of fun but only if you skim through the descriptions of the places the people and the abilities the characters use because they are monotonous and will make you bored in no time