"I-uh, I-"
'Swiss'.
"…" The leader had his mouth shut as he looked at her.
"System has been adjusted to original settings. Manual mode engaged, automatic mode locked. System's functionality fully restored. Available menus: Character, Skills, Inventory, Map, Quest Log, System Shop.
"Sorry about that," John says as he rubs his head sheepishly, "I heard you were getting married and decided to check in on you." He then blows away the fiery setting changing it to a quiet garden. A table and chairs are once again waiting for the two.
"Da Ying, what happened?" Xie De asked worriedly.
This novel is far from perfect. Its main selling point is a fairly well done overpowered female protagonist. On the other hand, its main weaknesses are a terrible sense of blind Chinese nationalism, the weirdly stupid mind games that all the characters face, as well as the complete lack of research the author has done on any of the subjects presented in the novel.I first began reading this novel both because of the amazing review score it had, as well as for a cross-dressing protagonist. The story starts off quite well, with a female lead who dies in her own world but is pulled into reincarnating into a future world because of a "grandpa teacher"-like spiritual entity inside her mind. It continues on to quite hilarious descriptions of her mother and the other characters around her as she slowly progresses through life pretending to be a boy in order to be able to inherit her father's inheritance and legacy.The characters in the novel, up to the point I've read, are quite interesting. They're all varied in personality and working through their own motivations as they interact with our heroine Ling Lan. We have an overbearing mother character, a kind grandpa figure who's also a hidden ninja, a stupid yet competent AI assistant, as well as a wide range of friends that collect around her. Yet the most interesting character is still the MC Ling Lan, who despite being an incredibly talented girl pretending to be a boy, only has the single objective of having a normal life and ultimately giving birth to the most talented child possible.Another aspect of this author that I really like is her skill in describing battles. The author has a natural talent for describing and directing melee fights between individuals. While there isn't much focus on any actual martial arts or actual techniques, the author still does a good job with understanding the capabilities and physical limits of the human body and expressing the fights as a natural and fluid manner. However, at the same time, the author is quite terrible at understanding the limitations of non-human entities.This brings me to one of the main areas where the author has been negligent - her research into science fiction. This is undoubtedly a science-fiction work, but this novel does nothing more than throw around the jargon without understanding what any of it actually is. Ling Lan's "AI Assistant
Damn I have to do all five stars cuz the rating is too low ?.
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Nice book with a promising start, the system's arrival was slightly different than what I've mostly seen but it only makes it better and have me anticipating its origins and capabilities. Although the English is good and not unbearable like other MTLs works on the platform, there's still room for improvement. Keep up the good work. ?
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