I love this story please continue writing it I beg of you it’s all I have been reading recently.
good but i need mtl (qidian changes name so they can steal novels)
In class, the teacher asked the students to imagine they're in a battle field and write essays about their encounters.
As the teacher supervised the essay writing, he finds one student idle.
Teacher:
Why are you not writing?
Student:
I got killed the moment the first bullets were shot.
I normally don't drop novels this fast, but I got too pissed off. I don't know about everyone else, but personally I started this novel partially because I saw that the MC was raised as a killer after being kidnapped by a dark organisation. I normally gravitate to these stories because it means the MC is ruthless and broken which makes for interesting reading (not raised to be assassin, but Supreme Magus is a great example of broken character). But then there is a timeskip and they are now teenagers. These two prodigies, who have grown up competing and sharpening each other every day get bullied by their slightly older sister who we have never had any indication is strong. Very annoying, but I accepted it and chalked it up to a staple of the genre, despite how infuriating it is. But then he gets attacked by a girl, randomly and with no provocation. So what happens. Does this MC who was raised as a weapon until the age of 9 fight back? Does the MC, who had to survive by fighting both male and female kids his own age to survive retaliate? No, he fucking doesn't. He takes it. Then she attacks him again. Is he finally provoked, and pushed to reveal a little of his killer instinct? Hell no. He doesn't like hitting women. Then when she attacks him again and pushes him to fight, and he wins, does he show any kind of ruthlessness? No he politely says goodbye, and says she can find him any time. This, in simple terms is a complete betrayal of who he is as a character, and it's a complete betrayal of the readers who have invested in the character. So dropped.
Writing Quality is 4.3/5 from me since the way the author describes things were easy to understand and wouldn't be much problem unless you're such a picky grammar reader.
The update's stability is five, considering how the author able to update many chapters on the same day.
Looking at the way the story goes fairly smoothly and logically without any hint of awkward development, I guess 4.7 is not a bad rate for the story development.
Here's the unique. The MC was a gambler, but unlike any other gambler, he is surprisingly the opposite of a bad gambler, a good gambler with family being the centre of his life. He was bold enough to leave his job/hobby as a gambler to make his family's relationship goes well.
The MC's wife also quite mischievous and tend to prank MC and her son. There is this moment where the MC's wife also broke out in tears upon knowing the MC's source of money was entirely came from gambling. This shows how MC's wife is another human being and not an expressionless robot, unlike in some novels.
The MC's son was designed like a child of his age. Full of curiosity, childish, and reckless.
The author has described the world background perfectly at the start of the novel. Hence, 5 stars from me <3
Hasn’t this already come out called the perfect accident or something like that why is it coming out again it’s literally a one onto one of the other one
It’s eerie and movie like and it’s one I couldn’t stop reading! For a Sci-Fi fan, this is a really good book with great quality of writing. Fell in love with Jet and other characters instantly.
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First of all, the cover is awesome. For the story it's equally great. I hope for Allaine to rise soon and support others like him. Maybe a gang would be fine also. An interesting story.
So far, pretty good. Quality is decent, though it could use with a quick edit. Very fact-paced, and makes the readers want to know what happens next. Keep writing author!
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All I can say us that your novel was great and impressive. It is very appreciating and good story.
You made a good story plot and it made me think that it was awesome...
Great story
Shameless One here: I'm honest when I say this thing has a long and I mean long way to go but, But I'm trying to develop an exciting scheme so give it a read, If you don't like it that's cool at least you read it.