Starting this review, I can say the book has potential if nothing else. The author is aiming for something unique, despite tackling one of the most troublesome genres to make unique IMO (The video game genre). I love how diverse classes and sub-classes are. It proves that there's room for a great World Building which is a good sign.Synopsis: I came to learn that a long synopsis isn't the way to go unless you add some real flavor and spice to it. Not to say your synopsis is bad, just that the cold reality is that a lot of people seem to skip the synopses or skim through them unless there's something present to grab their attention. Would recommend maybe cutting the synopsis a little or adding something to make it more worthwhile.Story Development: I gave this 5 stars. The author seems to have everything planned out which makes the story more enjoyable and gives it direction.Writing quality: Gave this a 4. In terms of grammar, kudos to the author. Pretty good and far from unreadable which many will appreciate. However, I took away a star for one reason and that's vocabulary. While the grammar is good, there are a lot of unnecessary words or phrases that could be made shorter with the use of more concise words that get to the point. I pointed out an example in just the second sentence of the first chapter. There are quite a few instances where shorter sentences could be made in both narration and dialogue.Character Design: Honestly, I don't usually mark this but I decided to make this the first book I actually marked it (sorry lol. Decided that if the author describes their character then I'll grade how well it was done). I gave this a four. Simply because the descriptions were kinda plain. I'm probably nit-picking but I like when descriptions bring flair and pizazz to the writing quality. Terms like "Blue eyes, short blonde hair" could use additional flavor. Like "Gorgeous Blue eyes that reflected the color of the sky". I love stuff like that. You can keep it the way you want though. I'm just nit-picking as mentioned before.Updating Stability: Judging from your weekly chapters, I see 0 chapters per week. Not sure what's up with that but gave it 5 anyway. You might have irl issues that prevent you from updating constantly.World Background: Gave this a 5. Done well IMO. I could nit-pick this too but I'll let it slide because that would be too harsh. You detailed the World the characters are in pretty well. Good job author!Finally, I must say this book has potential. Readers, if you're looking for something interesting, take a look at this one. Positive you have at least an 80% chance of enjoying. Overall 4.6. Keep up the good work author!
WELL IM WRITING A COMMENT TO THE AUTHOR , This was one of the first web novels i had read , each chapter kept me hooked , the depth of the feelings each character of the story spoke to me , i was heart broken to find out that this book was discontinued, may be if i read this again it may not be as good as i remembered it five years ago . but i truly hoped and wished then that you would continue the story where he leaves and starts schooling in the empire. I wanted to see how would he actually coax his fiance about his maids and their reaction. If you ever read this and have a change of heart please continue where you have left off , even if no one else reads it , I WILL.i don't know if you have just lost interest in writing or facing difficulties because of which you quit , then i understand .No mater how many novels there are out there , each one of them is unique, even yours , or if you cant find more recipes to incorporate into the story ,i will still love this novel .A five year late thank you note
So, the grand-father is a cultivator and apparently the highest rank at that time. I thought it would be higher than gold core. How did he get his great grand-daughter to believe him. Also he won't have any other woman right.
can anyone recommend some novels like this
All that premise gone down the drain....................................???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Start was good but as it progresses author started copying each and every detail from solo leveling and that Stupid MC so naive
Trash Quality Translation And Writing : CheckBots spamming that the novel is really great : CheckGood idea but poorly executed : CheckAuthor Writing about something and then saying completely different:CheckWebnovel deleting actual reviews and replacing them with reviews bots make : CheckCopy of another novel : CheckChinese author so means millions of chapters : CheckGonna read it again later ?Not gonna happen
I am currently reading the latest chapter via MTL. This series is a hidden gem. Misunderstanding Galore! President Pei can't seem to get a break lol.BELIEVE IN THE SPIRIT OF TENGDA! Key: Comedy + Video Game Creation + Business + Misunderstanding + Solid Cast
I see novels where the first chapter carries the story, consistent plot , good literature , humour or even a good synopsis but never have I seen a thumbnail carry views like that and attract readers. Author, you did your research?
The story idea of needing of using a pay-to-play system is interesting. Unfortunately most of the sayings and catchphrases use so much of a specific cultures idioms that the translation is garbled on actions, thoughts and descriptions of various things. The mc is so obnoxious that it's hard to find him interesting. With a some solid assistance and some rewriting in other areas it would become a more passable read.
typical hiding M.C...if u jst keep on hiding why are you getting angry...u are a trillionare why are u still going to class ??? #DONT READ #DONT READ #DONT READ #DONT READ
So fresh! Addictive. Best novel I've read so far.I've never wanted so badly to go privileged.The main character is consistent with himself and we want to see him evolve