Not a bad start, but could use way less swearing. And what is with the looking to see if his dick is still there? Are you going to make the MC a pervert? Have to say that pervert's stopped being amusing several stories back.
Good Novel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love everything about this. Enthralling protagonist? Check. (love Rena & Roma)Excellent writing quality? Check. (I'm actually taking notes)Amazing plot and setup? Check. (I love Shokugeki no Soma and if you liked it, you should definitely give this book a try!)Eagerness to read more? CHECK. I just want you to mass release at this point, it definitely has the feels (and somewhat the structure) of a Light Novel and the inspiration shows. Honestly, if I could vote right now, I'd have given you my Power Stones. Definitely adding this to my library!
I want to see the visual of Poppyand I also want to see Alex's visuals, how beautiful and handsome are they? I really like him, though I'm a little annoyed that Poppy cheated on him
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Well I have to say the story is interesting, writing style and humor is good. Currently at chapter 4 I bing read 3 about to go for 4th really good job author
This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this will fare well in the future! Kudos and congrats! from Review swap......
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Evil mc, rational, benefit oriented, meticulous, cunning, no poison, no romance, no harem, goal of immortality, loner mc.
I really, really like the premise of this one. It made me curious right away. The "Freakquency" turns people either into monsters, or heroes. but what determines which the person will become? How do they deal with the monsters? Who will be a hero? It's very intriguing.
This one is pretty good. Looking forward to it. I am supporting this novel before it became super famous and becomes everyone's favourite novel.
All i have to say is... Perfectly dark.Because it said review too short