Well, I said it was a good concept, but that I didn’t like the characters in my first review, and now I’m even more adamant on that. Now, the MC is just the dog of the woman who should be the real protagonist of this novel since she’s just better overall. It’s really pathetic how the main character is weaker than almost everyone. I mean… he’s even weaker than a butler for gods sake.
The story starts really well and the author makes a really good setting and develops the characters really well at the start. However when the MCs brother, lord and many of his friends end up dying is when it starts going downhill. The MCs character becomes inconsistent, from a pacifistic scientist to a bloodthirsty despot, the rest of the characters just lose most of what makes them good in the first place and become just placeholders, you can see this that the author barely mentions most of the survivors and close friends of the MC for more than a sentence or two. The battles can be interesting enough however, if every victory is a pyrrhic victory after two battles you dont have an army. Now the MC's army doesnt have many casualties later in the series however if you just slaughter your way through a province you plan to rule you end up ruling nobody. In other words the enemies are made to be just created from thin air, coupled with the fact that the start of the story showed us how hard it is from a village to recover from a failed campaign and how the MC knows this, his ruthlessness against what will be his own people are baffling to say the least. Another drop in quality and continuity is the whole monk arc. The author starts the series with a sci fi element, the AI teleports our MC through time to the sengoku era. Then it mostly follows a realistic historical setting, and then all of a sudden we get super powered monks, hidden arts power levels just like any other cultivation novel. And after that ark our MC is basically a god amongst men, he has profound understanding of everything and peerless martial prowess, and of course he trains his men in the same way so now he has an army of ridiculously powerful soldiers, which he recruits in a really filler way ( oh i was coming back from the mountain and they happened to be wandering around teehee). Over time the man from the future that wants a quiet peaceful life just ceases to exist and in his place is a bloodthirsty despot who does not care if he slaughters ten or a million people. Now all this could be how the author planned to have his character end up but personally i dislike the development. Another point i want to make is that in the end the premise of being from the future is just used to give his troops better rifles and cannons and has no other influence on the story. At the start of the novel i was hooked and would have given it full stars, however reading 200+ chapters i cant help but feel disappointment for all the lost potential of this rather unique novel.
Hello, everyone!I'm one of the translators working under NomYummi on TKA, Jouissance! Just here to say that we hope you're enjoying our translations (and our bonus chapters) and we'll do our best to carry this through and give you the best translations! TKA will be going through a bit of refining in the near future and remember to check the Wikia, where additional information can be found (but beware of spoilers!)I myself am on chapter 1449 right now, and I can assure you that this novel just gets better and better, and even has an awesome prequel called Top Glory, so keep reading!Also, some very shameless advertising: There are two rather active discord channels that we know of (after I notified Nom of the existence of the comments section XD)The following link goes to the less spoiler-filled, more chat-based, slightly more tame (???) and very, very active discord with bots aplenty.https://discord.gg/PpRnvgKThe following link goes to the more art/fanwork-based and nearly equally as active discord that has a NSFW section and shippers aplenty.https://discord.gg/GyHZgQTThey have both been previously advertised, but we decided to make it official. I think there might be more - I know there's apparently a dead one derived from the reddit - but me and Nom know of and are on these two, haha.The next link takes you to the wikia!http://the-kings-avatar.wikia.com/wiki/The_King%27s_Avatar_WikiaAnd last but not least is our Patreon, where you can come to support us, read ahead and push us into releasing more often, haha!https://***.patreon.com/nomyummiAnyways, that's about all I have to say! Look forward to seeing you on the discord servers!All the best,Jouissance
I have read up to volume 3 of this novel raw, though it looks boring, do give it a chance. pros: it is a unique story unlike any there I have, it is about how the mc uses the players to his advantagecons: big plot hole include how the troubles caused by the mc never get the devs attention. This game world is real and the players are like beings from higher dimensions or something like that so. There will be lots of action and comedy. There is little romance to where I have read which is about 400 chapters.
Characters are all bland and have no distinguishing characteristics. Everyone is arrogant and gets upset over the smallest things. Mc always wins. Every battle is a shouting match of moves "Three Finger Fisting!" and they all come down to one character's Cultivation level+Skill Level + Skill comprehnion vs. the others. No strategy or cleverness. Each are basically the same. Plot is just mc learning skills over and over and leveling up and fighting people that are pissed at him for no reason. Barely anything happens plot wise at least in the first 88 chapters. Very bad novel, reading it makes me feel like a bad person.
loved this book would love to read more i believe it should of told what happened to victoria the one he announced to be his mate and how their gonna help her real father gain his humanity back
This is good and I love how Emily’s story is going
It's really a good book to read
Really good
Captivating! Absolutely loved this book. Definitely worth your time and money to read.
This book is amazing. If you’re thinking about reading it, stop thinking and just do it. You will not be disappointed.This Author know how to make you feel so many emotions and still be happy with the story.This book is one that shows if you love someone enough and fight for it, love will always win
waiting for the next chapter