Very flat story, mc, world building, storytelling. The beginning chapters are so boring they being too short is actually good thing. It's the high rating that makes me started reading this novel, and so with high expectation this novel has become a disappointment. The lack of details in world building made me wondered, is this the author's counter action from reading too many Chinese novels' info-dumping, or the author felt just typical generic setting is enough. On the other hand, the info about skills are very frustrating to read. There are too many skills to remember, and because the story lacks meat and bone (Actual progression, character depth), I can't endure and decide to drop. All of these being said, I recognize and appreciate both the author's effort and his courage to publish his work. I think rewriting is required if the author wants to write a good story.
IT is Slow and non progressive novel. Read better novel with same conceptit has flawed foundation. Every thing MC say or do is right no matter how illogical. It is all so racist and call racial slang/curse to Korean & Japaneses people, will mocking India GODS in deeming ways. I am embarrassed to have read such a dirty piece of work. Shame on you for translating a novel of a bigot & racist.
I love harem novels and your novel is close to first place to me
decent!! this novel need a editor, if you read it as is then its like reading from google translate. Which so annoying and make your eyes suffer...
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This **** is trash Mc wanna hide his personality when The previous Mc already forgot his memory everyone knows this whats the point in hiding it an then you got him hiding that he could do magic for no reason at all an then another turn off is wanting to make a portal to bring men to that world so dumb such a beta MC thats retarded so dumb most the time its just complaints about dumb stuff how to satisfy the world of woman like who cares you just woke up an now wanna take the frustrations of all woman pullin a naruto GARBAGE
pick this one Im tired trying to read cultivation novels I like this new one. really ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!?!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I fucking love this story! Im not a pyscho, but the story just makes me want to laugh when it starts getting violent. Now, there is some unnecessary philosophical stuff and the author barely updates. It might just be me, but im always waiting for the story to update and it feels like forever when it does. SO, pLEAse AUThoR Update MoRe.?Besides that this story is the best story ive come across on this app.
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Why would I bother writing a review? The development of the story and it's concept is just amazing. I'll just simplify it.Read it. It's Good. Trust me
Okay... I got some really mixed feelings on this one. It does a lot of good things... and a lot of things are done poor...Lets start off with the negatives. There are definitely a few of them...Lets start with the biggest flow... IT IS SO SLOW! Like stupidly slow... The chapters early on are drawn out, taking a while to advance. On top of that they are long so not only are they already slow, they are really long taking a while to get through. At times it felt like a chore. Not only that but the characters take a while t really sat in. I mean the mc is basically like a mix between Naruto and Luffy.Now lets move on to the good parts. Thankfully there are a lot. The plot is fun. Really fun. It isn't taken to seriously and is full of jokes and funny moments. It has a fun way about it, and isn't to serious. And when it does get serious oh boy! I didn't cry at any moment. I didn't even come close but I definitely felt the emotion it was trying to give off. It also has a lot of cool powers at times. Now some (Hero) are very meh, and struggle to really impress me. I mean they are generic mc has badass powers, and is a mix between Naruto and Luffy. But thankfully others, like Kitsune fr example are pretty great. Funny since Kitsune should have been the Naruto rip off but he isn't. He's great. One of my favorites in fact. Also it has some good concepts at times. Yes it does a few things bad, but it doesn't ever get awful levels of territory. One of the best parts of the story is watching the main characters talk. watching them just talk to each other is by far the best part of the story. There were a few scenes that actually got a chuckle out of me just from watching them talking. The characters also do get pretty good. They actually play with the troupe of it being an anime story. An example is all the females seem to constantly have a thing with him, but then you find out Hero is actually n love with someone already and he begones thots them. I love it.So yeah. It's a good story. Just get some coffe and try to skim the early parts... Hopefully every volume doesn't start off that slow.
Alright so if non existent summary wasn't enough heres my impression after 9 chapters.Dude got kidnapped by some intergalactic space secret police because of a pendant that looked like the one this random highly wanted assassin had. His golden finger is two fold 1) he got compensated with a perfect gene serum that opened his potential and 2) the phantom guy (assassin) was like in the pendant or something and now is like "pocket grandpa" except young. Earth is considered a .5 star civilization, but on earth there is some understanding of supernatural powers and the people who hold them, but obviously not at a high level. Its a cultivation novel I guess now, but is pretty boring up to this point because I don't get the main characters motivation. He likes being lazy, has no obvious enemies, and generally has no real extrinsic reason to want to be strong. Its prose is pretty good but the story is boring, maybe someone with even more free time then I will soldier on and write a more complete review but for now its give or take - all depends if this sounds like your cup of tea.