Coming off my last review, I have finally given up hope of the author in having any common sense at all.Positive thing is that the author has severely reduced his sl*tty portrayal of females in the story, apart from Sharlyn.Other than that, the author is blatantly not considering how the other players even get their Lvls so fast when they do not reach the capabilities of the members of Zero Wing.Take this for example.During the Crusade Quest, the core members of Zero Wing manage to occupy the Top 100 Ranking List of players.They were Lvl 22 and above, as stated by the author. The previous No.9 was Tyrant who was Lvl 21(was annoyed at how he even got Lvl 21 too).The author even stated that the 1 lvl diff in Lvl 21 and 22 were like heaven and earth. Any player would have to grind for long periods to get to Lvl 22.Yet only after a few days, there are players who already reached Lvl 24. Amazing farming rate, even better than Zero Wing or MC.Though you can say that most spent time trying to complete their Class Change Quest, it was at most 2 days. Yet those.Lvl 24 players, who in theory cannot even defeat Lvl 30 NPCs, which MC helped Zero Wing with their upgraded Equipment to defeat, somehow gained so much Exp in a short timeframe.All because the author wants to create an "underestimated protagonist" scene for the 5v5 Duel in the Arena. Better still, one of the players already has full FineGold Equipment and a DarkGold Weapon. MC doesnt even have full FineGold Equipment.At this point, to not have MC be too far ahead of the other players, he has to resort to plucking numbers out of the sky and use them as the player Lvls. All without consideration of how these players would even obtain such high Exp.Seriously, if you are looking for consistency in this story, especially if player Lvls are a must for you, be prepared for a lot of blood puking, because it is a sh*t show out there.I have no idea how many times I have raged over this matter. You can say that maybe Im too into the details of the story and need to chill out and enjoy it from a different perspective, but details are what make the story. Consistent details are the ones that make a good author distinguish from a bad one.I can already forgive the author for blatant plagiarism from different Animes such as SAO and Log Horizon. Even OnePunchMan (wait till the Big Dipper Training Centre part).Just be aware if you want to read this story.
I may enjoy a cold and evil MC, but there are several problems:1st this is way beyond, I’ve read untill chapter 233 and he was the worst person in the whole novel, he is a complete sociopath2nd his personality is completely flat, he is like a robot, completely devoid of emotions, and incredibly boring. It gets tiring having a psycho MC if he never makes you laugh3rd and most important: the MC can be a total sociopath, but when the author tries continuosly to justify his choices with some cheap logic and a ridiculous view of the world that can be easily destroyed by anyone with a bit of common sense... well... that’s when u break the limit, if u want a spycho MC fine, but don’t try to make readers take his side as if he could be justify. He can’t and his logic is ridiculous and full of holes.I could go on, but, honestly it’s not worth it. I just add a last thing: the system of the nobles doesn’t make any sense, there is no wolrd were it could work it’s completely idiotic. Even if 99.9% of nobles are complete idiot that decides to keep any resource and technique for themselves there is bound to be someone who does not, and this someone would easily gain power, since it’s been clearly shown that there are countless genius among common people and just providing them the techniques would easily surpass all other powers that have an extremely low number of members die to their idiotic system.
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. I hope it’s updated really soon. It’s really getting good.
Great synopsis... Makes me want to read
the story is very interesting, i like it
Giving my full five stars. I am supporting you on this one.
Easy read. Enjoyed it
Very interesting. Enjoyed every.chapter
I loved this book! Can't wait for book 2!
Good story can’t wait to read the rest
when did he found about his daughter? can anyone tell me plz.
Great story! I really like it though the ending is not so much convincing. I feel that the author ends this story rushly.