I have only just started reading and already I hope to see the character develop more with his system and read what he will do with it I hope you don't leave the system out too much.
Read only upto chap 10, like the story so far. But i just can't continue reading as the grammer or translation are very awkward and seems to be getting worse as it progress
Well written. This seems promising, I just hope the author will work on it seriously. As I read chapter everything was getting harder and harder, yeah ... Literally Everything!
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Interesting, I was hooked from the start. "I hate doing math, it would be so much easier if we just fail the class and never worry about it again.""This line explains my life, i hate math too and i skipped math classes before. This story did numbers on I and I suggest you give a read. Please update more chapters.
Truly a slow start but starts to get remarkably good around chapter 81 (Phase 70). Gets REALLY good around chapter 149 (phase 126, a lot of chapters have part 1,2 even 3, so numbering is different)
Oh my gosh really a great story!!! Ahhh keep up with it. I don’t know why others are having issues with bl stories I enjoy them myself. I mean live is live such people are really weird lol but all are free to feel like they want. Still ur the author don’t let others control u. Nevertheless I am loving the novel and can’t wait for more. I so highly recommend this story to everyone!!!????
Just update more but ayy its a pretty good book
The story is basically this: Me and all of my servants will abuse you untill you spit blood and you won't try to get revenge even though we borderline tourted you.That's it, a MEGA DISAPPOINTMENT!!!!
Protagonist has absolutely no character development . The world building is random with new information appearing without rhyme or reason
NOT WORTH TO READ. THIZ WILL JUST MAKE YOUR MOOD SO BAD THAT MAKES YOU PUNCH THE AUTHOR! FUCKING 5 YEARS TIMESKIP BUT HE ONLY FUCKING GAIN A 5 LEVELS? SERIOUSLY!! THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I READ THIS KIND OF TRASHY TIMESKIP. DONT BOTHER READING THIS GUYS THIS IS JUST A PURE CANCER NOVEL
I’m going to shamelessly give myself a 5 star review just because I can. Hope you guys enjoy my story! I still haven’t found out how to improve the spacing on my novel. If anyone knows how to do that please let me know. Thanks!