Shadows of the Black Eagle

decent!! this novel need a editor, if you read it as is then its like reading from google translate. Which so annoying and make your eyes suffer...

I haven’ read that far but the kid is crippled it doesn’ t fix when he goes into vr he gets trampled on the story is not going good

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The story had a good premise but the author drags out a single fight scene over about 10 chapters and then it's going on about the reactions of people to the fight in another 10 chapters. The story isn't progressing at all and its literally the same plot point said over and over from different points of view broken down but in a totally useless way.

Sorry guy I did not write that much. I am not going to make excuses. I F*** up. why does this sound like I am in a relationship. Well anyways guy enjoyed that short a** chapter. Better luck next time. I will write more next time. seeya

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