It’s seem to me, it’s copy from Korean manhwa “Auto hunting with my clones”
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Let's just say I'm disappointed. If you want to read a story that all about misunderstandings then this is your cup of tea. If you've read ' I'm actually a cultivation bigshot ' then this is basically the same thing. Mc is ignorant and slightly on the dumb side besides the stuff he has "mastered." I usually don't write my reviews on these because of how little you actually get to know the story in 40 chapters but I can already see where it's going. If you want to read a story that isnt serious and maybe when you're bored and want a little comedy then I guess this will do. Hoped the author would've done better but I had me expectations a little high.
The story itself is not bad, it's a bit of a different take on your typical VR story.I'm personally just not a fan of the POV changes, the Family dynamic or the long traveling arcs. But that's more a personal preference than a criticism of the story itself. A major thing that bugged me is the lack of line brakes like : --------- or …......... for a new POV shift or the transition from Game to real-world, it is not necessary but it makes reading much simpler. An other point is the lack of reason, i didn't get a clear backstory of the MC or most of his family, 61 ch. into the story and we basically don't know much of why he is doing what he is doing. Was 5 years into the future really so bad ? What is his motivation? Without at least a better driving force it feels like the MC is just a kid that plays the game and makes a bit if money nothing more. And last but not least, the mental Age of the MC . How old is he exactly? The way he handles his Family issues make me think that he is mentally no older than maybe 20. That isn't in line with someone who has gone thru hard times and lost his family. But all in all upuntil this point the story is good, it's more my personal preference that is a bit different and I enjoy his actions in the game more than any of the IRL interaction he has. will read more the next few days. 4/5 stars
Guess my review is going to get deleted again, along with everyone else who doesn’t rate the novel high.The novel has so many plot holes and is written by an author who clearly has no idea what an MMO is. Hunters don’t need dexterity? Main stat is strength? Need to put points in loyalty just to make their summons work?Also, all the people reviewing the novel saying how investigative the MC is...the only reason the MC is like that because he lacks all common sense. The MC will go, “Wow, a crossbow?” even though he is playing a ranged class. It’s all just the author padding words.This novel is complete garbage, and all bad reviews being deleted just further proves that.
Muy buena historia, buena pausa y con capítulos versátiles... Una de las pocas historias que vale la pena leer cuando te aburre lo fantástico pero te sigue gustando un MC OP.
Well done this deserves a 5 star the overall has it all seriously I like how the plot twist are turning, the book's an eye catcher, keep up the good work nicely done Author!!
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