why does he bring the weak girls with him
Wow....the storyline is new to me but is indeed very promising. Keep up the good work Author. Love the story plot and development of the story. Keep going ??
A guy dies and is reincarnated as a foxgirl with the constant trolling of a goddess. Its so ****** yet so amazingly funny.140 characters 140 characters
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From the released chapters so far, MC will become someone with multi talent person. Although there's not much cooking chapter, i hope in the next chapter later, there will be more cooking chapter.Also magic and martial art skill can be added for MC skill to make the story more developed
Let's be honest, the read is "nice" (yes, quotes, because the story needs to be read with all filters turned off, just read for reading and you'll love it, I think), for those who want something superficial to laugh about is ok, it's not a perfect work and free from trope errors, character and world development, which in this case I would give between 2.5/3.5, not this 4,8 in novel rating.1 - Writing Quality (3.0): The novel itself urgently needs an editor, broken sentences during paragraph, constant repetition of words like "Lie Down!!" in all third-party observations, spot correction, use of “”, ? or ! and all in the same sentence (it’s hard, really).2 - Stability of Updates (4, ??): I have little priority to evaluate this item, I started reading with more than 300+ chapters released and the author kept posting constant chapters.3 - Story Development (2.0): The plot development is minimal in big words, there is no focal goal, there is no chase, there is no revenge, nothing, just the good old “I want to be stronger than everyone for my protect and protect those I care about”, well?? Generic at least and well generic in novels of this type, what wins readers are the variations of paths that the MCs take, here?? Just a straight line from one sect to another, “scaling” the levels of local potency and cultivation, as they say: “There is always a Heaven above the sky” and this novel takes it literally.4 - Character Design (2.5): I give 0.5 of my initial 2.0 for the development of the MC in the first chapters, where he finds himself in constant fear of dying (Although he is immortal, which justifies my IQ point at the end of this item), other than that, the development of both the main and the minors is zero, there is no evolution, no overcoming, no pressure, just an arrogant MC who despises everything and everyone because of his OP-God Level plot armor and everyone around the MC has less than 50 IQ, it's simple, looks like elementary school kids arguing (this includes the MC) and it always ends up with someone wanting to kill the MC, crying because the MC wants to kill them, and right away , everyone around saying that the MC is arrogant (bla bla bla, I just skip this external observation part), someone defending the enemy because only others can kill whoever they want and finally, the famous "you killed me , my family / my elder / my guild will take revenge" on someone coming to seek revenge and dying for to the MC since he is immortal and can be blown up endless times, how useful not????Finally, we have the famous trope, “If you are an MC's ally, you automatically lose all your rationality and critical sense”, yes, everyone who at some point becomes the MC's “allies” loses any sense of opinion, only him choose, define and be right about everything, the rest is just there to follow him as he thinks how amazing our MC is (joke).5 - World Background (3.0): Although we have descriptions of the places the MC travels to, we don't have an illustrated world around them, I feel that the MC lives in a big box where each location transition is a crossing of a door , there is no path, there is no adventure from X to Y, just a leap of time described in a few words about it leaving one place and going to another, we don't have a definition of the continent's environment, of the world where the continent is , we don't know how big everything is, even the sizing of the places where it is to me looks like a neighborhood or less, sometimes it looks like a backyard, nothing is explained and expanded, just quoted briefly followed by lines and lines of MC killing X enemies or arrogant dialogues between him and everyone around him (his enemies, as always, everything and everyone wants to kill the MC because he didn't see the mount tai)6 – Final Observation (3,0 final rating) - Overall the novel is good for those who want to laugh, but without evaluating anything in particular, just read for the pleasure of seeing slaps in the face, arrogant characters dying and a MC dominated to the point that nothing is an obstacle, just his minimum IQ for being the biggest enemy in history, with misuses of so many advantages that my brain hurts with the stupidity of our magnificent MC (joke again).
Can people stop puting random reviews. I want actual reviews that help new readers to my novel decide if they want to read. If you havnt read but put a review i will delete. if you put good or random letters i will delete. I want why you like it and what you dislike and where it can be improved.PLEASE KEEP CONSTRUCTIVE
I just accidentally found oug about this book so i havent read it past 20 chapters buT since the Beginning you coUld tell that The book is very interesting and im looking forward tO more development
I love the novel so far it’s bery engaging and funny!
Let's make the first actual review. The story is extremely repetitive and cliche. It's almost identical to countless others cultivation stories. You have the ex-girlfriend betraying him with an arrogant young master, he's treated like trash by everyone, well, you get where this is going... It's not entirely bad, though. Author seems not to be an *******, he might develop this novel in a better way in the upcoming chapters.
Great storyDon't drop........................................................................................................................
it could be an awesome story if the MC wasn't such trash and arrogant he's basically nothing without the system and is perverted for no reason but great writing