Imagine living 32 years of your useless life and still clueless about the way society operating even after reincarnating to the body of 12 years old kid. Even having degraded IQ and dehraded mentality. Remember, your reader isn't 8 years old kiddos who yearn for heroic tale in this site.
Found your book recently, and was instantly hooked. Can't wait for more chapters.Writing Quality: Great writing. No obvious grammatical errors. Good sentence.Story Development: Very interesting plots. Has multiple plots for different characters going on. Curious on how these plots will interact.Character Design: MC isn't flawless, feels human. MC can grow as a character, and isn't that over powered. Side characters also feel real. They have history, problems/issues to work through.Updating Stability: Decent chapter rate. Consistent and author will say if something delays an update.World Background: Great worldbuilding.
Honestly quite horrible, granted tho I’ve seen worse. I can only assume those giving 5 star ratings aren’t native English speakers; or have received monetary compensation. Grammar, sentencing structure and the overall storytelling is quite bad.Now this is not me taking a shot at the author I commend you for trying, but readers should be given an honest account of what to expect.My review applies to the first 12 chapters. Couldn’t handle more
You're stuck in a loop. A loop that will take you far away. You know where you hope the loop will take you, but you can't know for sure. Yet it doesn't matter. Now, tell me why?
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