The story is good, every chapter is sooooo interesting that i want more chapter..more ?, the flow of the story is addicting hehe.... Sorry im not good in english, i cant express my self well.To put it short, the novel is not boring though there are some grammar issues but i dont mind it coz im not good also in grammar
"Well as I live and breath, if it isn't the King's little brother" the woman's deep accented voice filled the tense room. "I thought you didn't believe in, as you put it foolery? why the sudden change?"
- "Now go to sleep, soldier!"- she said raising her spear- "we'll talk when..."
Liam "I became too excited" said while rubbing his ear.
[ Party Invitation by Party Leader < Zachary Black > ]
What should I say? I want to give this novel the lowest possible score if not for me considering the hardwork of the translator. First of all, this novel has good world background and story development because the author just copies and steals other people's ideas. The author tried to copy multiple ideas and compile it as his own, but failed miserably. Most of what made up this story are stolen from Fallout series' lore, example of which are the deathclaws, mutated humans researched by the government, the project of eden, the fallout vaults, and most of the lore of fallout but the author just patched fallout's lore with other stories' ideas to fit his narrative. Because the author is lacking of imagination or is lazy, he even stole ideas from conspiracy stories, and went as far as using other people's name; Is it that fucking hard to think of a name? To top it all off, the b*tch of an author is a racist himself, what a f*cktard. Yes I am biased because the author ruined the fucking story by adding his racist ideas. I repeat, the premise of this novel is good because it is ripped off of other people's intellectual property, and as far as I know the author seems to not even give credits to where he got those ideas from.
Wmw is the copy of this. That said, this story is ridden with so many general inconsistencies that attentive readers notice that it's just bad. Don't even try to follow the timeline in the story because even the author doesn't care about it. 3 years can pass and the mc will be the same age. It's sad when the original can't even come close to the copy. If someone said the 2 are too similar and one had to be removed this one was going imo.
Alexander, The Great invading the alien community ? ? The idea itself is so unique that you won't find anything like it. You have got to read this story! You did a good job, author!
I love it, this is really good the character design is great too, I'd give it a 4.2 rating would give it 5 but it's not yet that good but i expect something good
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