The novel has good potential. The world building is good. . The character building is excellent.I hope the author continues writing the novel. .
The MC leaves a lot to be desired truthfully. It’s wonderful that the author knows how to make a smart person, but he fails in almost every other aspect.Most recently, the mc was gathering his capabilities to have emotions again and give the people around him that love him solace that he cares about them. Unfortunately one was critically injured and now he goes off on a embarrassing tirade about how he has to give up emotions etc (pasted below) and what a boring life that is. Might as well never involved himself with anyone, but he has to because truthfully he hasn’t really accomplished anything by himself aside from his incredible theoretical knowledge and capabilities.*”It was too much for him to expect he could have emotions like a normal human being. He was most definitely not a normal human being. He was given a great gift and a certain destiny to fulfill. To desire some normality in his life was a great injustice to the gift he was given.He mustn't be tied down by human emotions, morals, and expectations; they were chains, and complacency was the guillotine.Never again would he forget.'To protect, I have to abandon. To save, I have to destroy...' Vaan thought before getting a strange sense of déja vu, even though he had no recollection of a similar incident.*”
I'm really bad at writing reviews but I'll give it a shot, the grammar is excellent it's got the typical World building you would expect from cultivation novels the side characters and harem members are all fleshed out and actually feel like interesting people the main characters also really likeable I really have nothing bad to say about this novel love it a lot.
Hello I'm Joel nice to meet you.Looking forward
Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best! ??
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Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will
The synopsis is really good! I would really love to finish this one. Nonetheless, since I haven't still read all of the chapters, I hope there will be a lot of scientific terms that would greatly help a young researcher!
Honestly, when webnovel recommended this story to me, I was surprised that it had so few views, since it's concept is very good, however, after reading a few chapters I understood the problem, I couldn't read forward, boring protagonist, laughing like a stupid all the time, unbearable developments and views to keep me reading. Too bad that such a good concept is being wasted like that. I don't know if these problems improve in the later chapters, but I don't want to waste my time to find out.
The writing is amazing ? And the story is thrilling to the point you are reading it till 2:39 in the morning because you can’t stop reading. By far one of the best novels i have read anyway.
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Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!