well i have been reading it for some time but Gradually begin to loose interest , i don't know the exact reason just that the story has become a little less engaging , maybe you can try to polish the revenge element more , try some more lemons or just some better character development
This is a new novel and people will not remove their reviews of the last novel. Love the book and thought I should let you enjoy it too. Just leave a comment or a review of how much you like or dislike the book and I will most likly answer.
Comments are somewhat accurate. Let me summerize in my own pvo. Story progression is slow, Info dumpping most of the chapters which most wont even help the story when it could explore or change the trajectory of its progression. 1000chaps still 1star beast tamer.
Very few originals are found in webnovel which are based on the Indian culture, And i think this novel is one of the best among them even if the novel isn't progressed much, the starting and world background coupled with characters making the novel very promising. Author please continue this novel okay? since very few Indian culture based novels are this much promising.
welp the review i gave is just. till chap 11 after the boy wakes up and **** he has the ability to learn anything and do the impossible possible and some other **** yet i cant seem to find marc at all it like there is only 1 soul in the body and not 2 even tho marc got into teh body it like the boy killed him or smth the subject of marc isnt even touched upon but it should be if marc himself is in the damn synopsis. anyways what my problem is that this has a pretty **** grammar quality but it readable. it has ****ty character design for the kid acts like an ***** even tho he was inside his own body for 5 years or smth but he doesnt seem affected at all and it not normal he doesnt seem to have any psychological side effects even after he was inside his body still functioning but couldn't talk, if i put the best cookie u ever ate in front of you and then starve you for years how would you think ? anyways basic psychology is a NEIN. World background ?.... well we know he is pampered by gey mothers and has a grandma who loves him even tho she never say him. and he loves them even tho he never saw them, as his moms his grandparents are rich too. yeh imo the only thing till chap 11 is just that he is rich and cant even seem to find the slightest bit of fear that he might have a hard life. if he has not hardships he can never learn truly nor experience ****.story development.... ohh wait that exists here ? i thought the whole story was about the kid being a superhuman who can do anything if he desires nothing interesting here 0-0. updates are very good. all in all if the guy would learn from his mistakes and create a new novel he would best start small and then make it big and he shouldnt be focused on filler till at least he has 30 to 40 chaps cuz u gotta make the main story a priority not how much the mc is so badass and he has the IQ of 1000. Buildungs roman. if u ever heard of that term learn it. anyways hope next time the author will make a better first impressions cuz this was truly a disappointment.
This is one of the best novels, I have read. The plot and characters are just amazing. It is a real gem. I just hope that the novel will get more updates in the futur. Thank you author for this novel ?
If you’re looking to read a game novel, this ain’t it chief. Honestly, when I was reading this novel, it seemed like the author just woke up one day after a long night of partying, hungover and still a bit drowsy. A lightbulb suddenly lit up in their head, their brain was telling them, ‘Hey! Why don’t you write a novel, a game novel’. And so they did, they slowly got up from the cold hard floor littered with red plastic cups and empty beer bottles, dragging their body over to their computer, they started to type away, completely unaware of the bits of mysterious white powder covering the area around their nose. They started by writing down whatever cliches they could think of, and they made the protagonist and the antagonists while they were at it. The protagonist is fine for the most part, but the antagonists are on another level of stupid, as if the only thought in their mind is steal and loot gear, basically just throw-away villains. So then the author kept clacking away on their keyboard with their fingers coated with a nice layer of cheeto dust. Still hungover, the author couldn’t think clearly at all, their head was throbbing so using their arms as a pillow, they slowly relaxed and drifted off to the land of dreams.In there, they saw a mini version of themselves holding a mini shovel. The mini author begin to dig holes in the feild that was labled ‘the plot’. And after digging god knows how many holes, the mini author left and came back shortly after, this time holding a few signs in their hands. They planted the signs near the holes, one for each, and marked them as ‘plot hole 1’, ‘plot hole 2’, ‘plot hole 3’ and so on.The author then woke up and after adding a few more details to their novel, they slowly admired it, thinking to themselves, ‘Boy have I created a masterpiece’, then promptly hit ‘publish’.
this novel is amazing but you ask why so low rating? because this novel author used brain to write instead of copy pasting like Lord of mysteries.
I am loving the novel so far... The master-disciple relationships feel very geniune and not forced... The only downside of the novel is every young master or immortal like to use force... We know they maybe a few people like that but most powerful people would see that type of behaviour beneath them... They would use money and luxury items to charm the woman/man they want to get into their pants... Wish the author would correct that part because its becoming a repetative, uninspired novel... The MC cann't be the only one out of the scores of cultivators who want romance over forceful interactions... That would ruin the novel...
i have been hook in reading the manhua and started reading the novel and its grate. the cultivation ranks that i have not understand in manhua its easy to understand in this. thanks
Petition to get Era of the Gods back!!!!!!!!!!!----------------------------------------------------------------????????????????
Really felt like I wasted my time reading this novel. It was pretty decent in the earlier stages, but continued to go downhill until it got worse, only for us to be given that horrendous ending. I initially picked this up because I saw it was complete with no many chapters, but it was such a let down to see the reasoning behind why this novel came to an ending so soon. Sure we got a summary at the end there, but that only left me more unfulfilled and disappointed because it felt like no effort was put into it. So much wasted potential.