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'I hope grandma Lyra is here today.'
"If not for finding a bride…?"
Now getting the familiar scent of cream and chocolate, his last resolve was blown to bits. Picking up the scrubber, he started cleaning the pans.
She shouted loudly towards the door.
She sat at the right of Li Jie who was comfortably lazing away on the middle of the three sitter couch with his legs stretched out on the coffee table .
In the prior War Conferences, it was decided that since Drussians had no idea where the Breetish could attack from, they would instead concentrate all of their forces in the core regions to protect the most important national assets.
No, in this dream, it was from the perspective of someone called "Leon Forestang". An orphan who came out of nowhere. Literally. Jin doesn't know how he knew but he knew. He knew instinctively that this man was Kainen. Kainen Moonshine. How? The fact that Leon was searching for that little girl with the long wavy green hair- even though that little girl was a full grown woman already. And the fact that when he saw her again, both Jin and Leon's heart nearly stopped from both relief, pure happiness and yet dread.
"You want me to join some inter school contest?" I asked in surprise. Apparently we didn't have the fame that the world's only institute of necromancy deserved.
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This story has a huge problem, the character design and i mean 90% of all the character. Let's start with the MC, is dumb i read many novel and this is the dumbest mc possible, like when he need to make the upgrade for is car he doesn't think at all... i mean the frist mutated beast he kill weighs 10tons but he regard the mechanical arm as "useless" when this "uselees" arm can lift 20tons, can't you just smash everything with just that? mutated zombie, wall, enemy, clean all obstacle, and carry stuff for you? instead he chose that upgrade just when he find some obstacle on is road 100s chapter later... another upgrade that he demand useless is a beam that can store material for him, he upgrade it just to use it once, ONCE! i mean when you find a enemy car or a tank can't you use it to steal some important component and make it useless? can't you stole their bullet? maybe it won't work but can you at least try! (in my country we have a saying "dont search the hair in the egg" and i normally dont do it, but this "egg" as too many "hair"). I have explained the mc and you can image or find out the rest of the "main" character, im too lazy... Now let's talk about the rest of the World, i mean i understand is the apocalypse and the evil side of mankind is showed, but can we be a little more realistic? evry where he goes if is not commanded by the military or a female character is full of female slave. I mean i dont understend, is chaina special? how come there isn't any decent person? i mean we are talking about the start of the apoclypse if it was year later then i could understand but as soon as it start is like in everybody mind: "**** yes let's go raping" it's dosen't make sense at all... Overall if you can a poor character design and a world background that dosen't make much sense and you like apocalyptic story with a "system element" you can try read this...**: actually there is lot more that i dont like but 90% is related with the mc dumb choice, i mean i understand you dont want the girl to sleep on the floor but why waste a nucleus (or more then 1 since he also added space) just for one bed??? is like 150+ chapter that im going crazy! just buy an amaca for christ sake! is dumbness know no rival! and the frist ability that chose from the lab should make him a "genius
This is the first story review I will do on webnovel and I am happy it is this novel.The writing language is ok, the main character shows the maturity of a regressed middle age man who wants to change the future. though there are not enough chapters to fully consent to the world background, but the current chapters are enough to give a good glimpse of the Author's writing skill so I doubt I will be disappointed.I can happy recommend this story to others to read since it is different from other novels with mc: that pushes through with op systems that is common these days.
It was awsomely no joke thrililng action!! like this invisible dragon beat colbob
