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this novel is extremely good in every aspect except for the amount of updates it has. With only getting a chapter a week and maybe 2 if you're lucky it really kills the drive, at least for me personally to want to comeback often to check for a new chapter
Whilst this seem to be another trashy fanfic.It is actually a very good one.It has a lot of good laugh and somewhat acceptable power system.Also the genderbender has been mentioned very obscurely so it is not so bad for you so it doesn’t feel to much of a gender bender.
Kind of lack luster. I got through 35 chapters and nothing really stands out that makes me think this is a good book. He gets powerful really fast, which is fine because it is explained, but he can break into a highly secured facility guarded by around a hundred people who have trained their who lives, that are incapable of even slowing him down for a couple of minutes. He conveniently gets connections with people with powerful secret techniques that he can conveniently use even when no one else his level can use that shows power above his level with no draw backs and has many stages that will make him even more powerful when unlocked. He gets a (presumably) god powered equipment conveniently picked up off of some guy, who comes from a group that really should not have been strong enough to get it in the first place (and no one seems to figure out it was them despite them losing several people to gain this equipment). Even if it makes a little sense, some action go too far away from common sense and it is way too frequent.Everything is just working out for the protagonist too well. I would not complain if the book actually went somewhere with a sub goal other than just get stronger. Getting stronger is a means to achieve a goal, but should not be the goal itself.
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
you really created something that I really liked, brought the idea of the system to the real world, I apologize if I did not write correctly I do not have English as the main language
I really like the new version of the novel. Its much better. you get into the story really easily and the grammar has improved. I really like the story and its just a fun novel. I recommend you read it!
-good story-great characters-interesting setting-loli *nosebleed*-no op protagonist-sadly no update for loooong timeI can recommend this story to you. It's free, but you dont have a lot to read. Hopefully the autor comes back to finish this soon :-)
It was good I think but I think others should read it also to see how they feel about the book. ?????????????????????????????
Just a review in respect towards your dedication for this series! Good luck bro, hopefully this will blow up like the previous two :D :D :D :D
The writing quality is something very hard to find on this app in my personal opinion, and to somehow prove me wrong is this author who does an outstanding job. More frequent updates is what makes understanding the story way easier, not re-reading a chapter to recap, honestly as close to leisurely reading as possible. The story has a great starting point, and currently I'm only at 169 out of 260 something chapters at the moment and I think the author doesn't get as much credit for the way they manage to develop the story at reasonable pace without crazily jumping up all the time. I will say the only downside is that the world background is very in depth for the purpose of understanding, but only to the extent of the MC's understanding. If you've read to the end of this review, I recommend you read this novel because it is like a luminescent sapphire, absolute gem. ???
Amber Sword? But probably not as good as that. Hmm... Descent of the Magic God and Night Ranger. This book is gonna have some serious competition. I hope author treats the world as a real world and the 'ex' NPCs like humans or monsters... Or whatever their species is. MC acting like the whole world is his gameboard is outdated and well, impossible. Since ppl are real can we have proper effects of The Butterfly Theory and also his affect on timeline. His every action will suposedly be against the actual plot. So please... Give us some plot clashes and unexpected events. Now for the much awaited rating.Honestly, I can't see the book. Is it a bug??? So I am giving a one star to all of it. I am really sorry here. I tried to read and give proper ratings, but the books is probably too high tired for low levelers like me. I can see nothing! *sob*So one star. Really sorry. Maybe when I am able to see it again, I will start editing it. Cya. Hv fun. And qidan still doesn't has an 'edit' function. Wtf...