so far I've read, I'm a bit confused. are the different chapters going to be POVs of Edwin and Everett
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Great story.The story is about Ashton a 18 year old child and nine year old Matt a adult. Both of them lived a pretty normal life of orphans but one day everything chages just cause X wanted it to. And the inhuman game of destruction begins. Writing quality - Great, no grammar errorsStory development - Doesn't let you down, I will rather say it was fast pace no time was wasted on dally-daling.Character design - On point, especially with Matt despite acting like adult we can clearly see his innocent side while being carefree Ashton shows the will to protect it.World background - It gives the me Maze Runner vibes (I don't know I might be wrong about it. only author can tell property)Should you read this novel? Of course, I will recommend it. Matt and Ashton's chemistry is on point. Though I am looking forward to Ashton's partner since I can't see Matt as someone to ship with anyone at this moment. May be my fujoshi self just need a time skip until Matt is older?
Its good but its painfully slow. There are just too many words to really enjoy it. Author said chapters are around 4000 word long and the u have a fight that takes almost three chapters… Im at chapter 70 and this coulve been done in 30 and I wouldve enjoyed it more.
Another great story I found!This one has so much potential, to be honest. This is a diamond on the rough. I enjoyed my time reading chapter by chapter.The weaving of the plot and story-telling were intricate and really entertaining. Though I wish that the Author would give more effort in describing the surroundings or give us more detailed visualization of the background. This is in order to give us more glimpse to the world that the Author created for the readers.So far, in totality, it is 9.9/10.Must-Read!
This story is unique and well written. The system is more than the general systems that you see in other novels, which is great for people who like to read system novels like me and got tired of repeated novels in the same genre..Looking forward to more chapters and a lot of great ideas through the story.Best wishes for a great novel.
Great story. I absolutely love overpowered MC's who are keeping their power a secret(my fav. genre of anime tbh) totally looking forward to seeing him shock people when he finally reveals it and also looking forward to seeing more of Theo. I wonder if Theo would go to the dungeon with him? that would be an awesome arc where father protects the son who is fascinated by the monsters cute~ but that's just my wishful thinking.
Buen Fondo del Mundo aceptado, Historia relativamente original aceptado, Trasfondo misterioso aceptado, en resumen Buen Libro.Me decía que era muy corto así que voy a copiar y pegar.Buen Fondo del Mundo aceptado, Historia relativamente original aceptado, Trasfondo misterioso aceptado, en resumen Buen Libro.Me decía que era muy corto así que voy a copiar y pegar.Buen Fondo del Mundo aceptado, Historia relativamente original aceptado, Trasfondo misterioso aceptado, en resumen Buen Libro.Me decía que era muy corto así que voy a copiar y pegar.Buen Fondo del Mundo aceptado, Historia relativamente original aceptado, Trasfondo misterioso aceptado, en resumen Buen Libro.Me decía que era muy corto así que voy a copiar y pegar.Buen Fondo del Mundo aceptado, Historia relativamente original aceptado, Trasfondo misterioso aceptado, en resumen Buen Libro.Me decía que era muy corto así que voy a copiar y pegar.Buen Fondo del Mundo aceptado, Historia relativamente original aceptado, Trasfondo misterioso aceptado, en resumen Buen Libro.Me decía que era muy corto así que voy a copiar y pegar.
The original novel is called Reign of the Hunters and there is already a translator for this. And it looks pretty damn close to his work.This seems to be a copy and paste from Jimminx's work.I am fine with other people translating the same novel, but you don't steal someone else's work. That is just ****ed up.
So far the story has been good and main character was likeable. The world development in the book so far hasn’t been much but that’s ok since it’s just the beginning of the story , so in conclusion the story has been good .
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHh Screw qidians character count, also good novel only problem is not enough chapters to binge otherwise 5/5