The concept is rather new and is not bad, however the nationalism is extremely excessive. Every funeral victim is a war hero/national hero teacher/national hero researcher that sacrifices themselves for Huaxia etc.
OK so honestly this book is very nice. I love the detailed scenes and the first chapter really captures the spirit. Nice Work. I'd also like to advice you to work on the synopsis. It's nice but you know...arrange it in a way that'll make it more appealing. Readers read synopsis first to determine whether they'll read the book! ❤️
Hey guys, Author here. I just wanted to leave a few words regarding this story of mine:First and foremost, the book is inspired by The Beginning After the End by Turtleme. This beginning of this story mirrors TBATE, and if you've read the work, then you'll immediately recognize the plots and situations. Both stories obviously diverge later on, but you can expect the first few dozen chapters to be extremely similar.I'm also trying to improve my writing with this book. I'd say I did a decent job at checking for mistakes, but if you happen to find any, or just happen to read a sentence that doesn't sound right, just let me know. I always try and correct mistakes I missed.Pacing is also something I struggle with, so any tips on how to go about adjusting and setting the speed of events would be much appreciated.Here are also some questions I've gotten:Is this story a harem?- No. Is there R-18 content?- No.Is the story perfect?- Fuck no.Obviously, the last one isn't a question I've gotten, but please don't start reading this story expecting some modern masterpiece. I'm just a simple author who's trying to write their very first novel.That's all I've got for now. I really do hope you enjoy my story if you decide to try it out. If you have any questions, just ask away or ask me on discord. (Link will be in the synopsis of the story)Thanks for everything :)
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
