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A perfect setting for mafia novel . Not too much fluff in the start as it should be.
I'll br honest, I haven't read all that much. but I've read enough that I'm confused on the very basis of the story. and its also probably not a good sign when the names of the magic change in the literal synopsis. its definitely Interesting, the character from what I've seen is fine and the world is fairly fleshed out. but its not something g id be willing to sink more time into.
I like this story a lot I just feel like it progresses too slowly. Grim who is also Glen takes forever to go from an apprentice to a level one sorcery and then takes forever to go from a level 1 sorcerer to a level two sorcerer. I'm literally almost 500 chapters in and all he has become at that point is a super-strong bottom of the food chain level 2 sorcerer. I get that they are trying to make the story more expansive but I would at least like some progress in the characters besides him deciding to go to prison for a century that would have died in a few years anyway. The entire plotline where he decided to go to prison for his love wasn't development it was stupid. It wasn't a mistake anyone after living 300 years or so should make. Overall the story is so slow-paced that I wonder if it is ever going to finish. the main character is probably going to 2700 chapters to get anywhere and that's being generous. if they decided to really get stuck at a certain power level it could take 3000 to 3600 chapters. Sorry that just too long a commitment for me.
Characters a very well written the only negative thing about this book is it’s too addicting to read per the amount of chapters released a day
I would say the story is interesting but the author just cut to the chase, from the boy reincarnating into another world to being able to cast spell within the first 2-3 hours, I had say the concept is rubbishalso the magic that took people years to learn only took him 2 hours.The author should at least be considerate.
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Yeah, sorry just couldn’t get past the really rough translation. I keep coming back and trying a few more chapters but had to give up. Right now most of the characters are pretty flat with weird spikes of personality that don’t always match. The story is also lacking descriptions and details, while reading like a list. Congrats on writing and please keep up the hard work. Everyone starts somewhere and it is already more than I can do.
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An interesting twist our MC is more of a detective in a wuxia setting. The pacing is a bit slow at first but picks up. Overall an interesting premise.
Really good one... Up up up... Recommend!!! Everyone let vote this novel....
This novel is somewhat similar to Anchestor Above. The purpose of the system is to dominate the world, and It’s a bit disappointing to me.I don’t mind mc rulling a place and developed it into the stongest place but to rulling the world with messy government is... no to me.I’ll give this novel 3/5