Hizu

Hi, glad to be the first one to give you a review, good work on the story development, I just want to point out some things, even if it is a work in progress give it a shot on the synopsis, be playful, creative, and then don't worry about grammar correction for now.

This story is entertaining and has distracted me for a bit. I have read many Harry Potter fan fictions but I have never read one quite like this.