I haven't spot any flaw or maybe i just miss it...ah there are some but it okay pass it and the story begin to be interesting ... This is story about mc transmigrated to world of summoning but the world already meet its end... Human about to lose so they live like dog... Sumoner lose their ability because some kind of barrier lock the spirit world or something
The mc can summon human from earth and gain strength from them when they growth....hmmmm....oh they can awaken some kind of superpower... I'm sorry if it hard to read but if you understand please give it a try...
I really like this novel and after reading five of the seven chapters that are available at the moment I can see where there could be some improvement the writing quality is............... satisfactory. The stability of updating oh dear God I looked at the amount of chapters there were on the side tab and six of the chapters were updated seven months ago well the seventh chapter was 10 days ago(*•*) this is bad. Everything else though is pretty good. (Word count 473)
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I really hope they continue translating this novel. Really enjoyed the mortal journey.
strongly recommend reading the first, since this is a continuation from it.
Wow... truly fabulous.. its a roller coaster of journey of some beautiful ladies.. loved the way u wrote it.. keep going!! Loved the characters and the amazing plot!!
Is it worth reading? Yes. But, skip to chapter 40 and wait till chapter 70 till it gets better. The only thing you miss by jumping to chapter 40 is a small backstory of 1 chapter. It tells you about how he has/had a master who taught him basic sword work and how to channel mana. The last day he saw his master when he came home from seeing him he found his parents dead with a powerful crazy person above them with his sword sill stabbed into their bodies. He fights the bad guy and fails miserably and keeps fighting him to try to keep him away from his little sister. He fails and fails and then they get closer to his sister and she runs in front of him to stop the bad guys attack from hitting him. She then out of no where lights up like a lightbulb and it knocks back to bad guy and he gets scared and says she is connected to people called "Fate" or "Fated". She then gets sick and is sick for the rest of her life. They become orphans. That is all you will miss by skipping to chapter 40. On top of this this LN is 8th grade syndrome and no one dies or at least the MC is never allowed to kill anyone even if they are constantly attacking him and hurting him or trying to kidnap the girl that his was hired to guard. Then even more 8th grade syndrome comedy happens in the LN that probably only the author himself finds funny.
I think this whould of ben better if this was a one piece fan fic im just sayin u miss out. Pls im beggin u like this post im mentaly deprived
Great start, really enjoyed reading. The world background is creative and imaginative.
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The author has a lot of experiences and it was seen in his novel. The narration was good and proofreading it will make it perfect. The author will still improve in the future.
I deeply recommend this book!
Good luck author!
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