Majestical_potato

Interesting start. I am curious about the mysterious girl's identity.A lot of worldbuilding can be seen, the author also did a good job in depicting the cruelty of war.The only thing I would like to point out is that dialogue tags are overused at times, but it improves in the later chapters.Overall, great job!

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5/3/2/2/2 2.8

the whole plot could have been over if mc just went to his wife's house in his military outfit with his staff and clear any misconceptions.

I'm fan of cultivation novel, this is one of the good so far I've  read. The story has so much potential. Currently I'm at chap.150 and I wanted give few advice if author don't mind .

1. I noticed you skipping 90% of fight just by announcing the result. IMO it'll be more entertaining if add how he defeated hus opponent or how he was defeated in a fight.
2. In important fights even try to the give description of the technique, stance how the weapon look like etc
3. Add more detail while describing character because it help us imagine the in head. Like what their height how their figure ( silm, skiny, well bulit etc)  how the look like, what they're waring etc.
4. If you can then give us a auxiliary chapter regarding details of cultivation realm, like the name of the initial level, grades of alchemist and formation master, also level of the alchemy item (Pill, Potion), array level, weapon grade etc.

Solely for calling football soccer. At least Translate the sentence properly koreans say football what is soccer? Sucker?.

Idiotic translator would have been fun to read but ruined it by calling the game soccer.

Bunch of thirsty weebs.

I want this Now! Dont make me wait months :(! Pls
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This novel feel nice to read. Unlike a lot of ppl saying it's boring I think this novel is a gem. Give it a try this is worth it.

If you're reading this I wish you all the best.

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Was waiting for another novel about blacksmithin called “Blacksmithin the tempering begins with ones flesh” It has an original idea of forging oneself into a weapon